Common English Mistakes in Grant Proposals by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Grant Proposal in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Our research team is seeking funding to develop innovative solar panel technology that can be used in desert environments. The project aims to increase theefficiency of solar energy capture by 20% compared to existing solutions. We believe thatthe implementation of this technology will significantly contribute to energy sustainability inthe United Arab Emirates. The grant will be used for purchasing equipment and conducting field tests in desert areas.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Great job! I just needed to add a few missing articles."

Our research team is seeking funding to develop innovative solar panel technology that can be used in desert environments. The project aims to increase the efficiency of solar energy capture by 20% compared to existing solutions. We believe that the implementation of this technology will significantly contribute to energy sustainability in the United Arab Emirates. The grant will be used for purchasing equipment and conducting field tests in desert areas.

Our research team is seeking funding to develop innovative solar panel technology that can be used in desert environments. The project aims to increase efficiency of solar energy capture by 20% compared to existing solutions. We believe that implementation of this technology will significantly contribute to energy sustainability in United Arab Emirates. The grant will be used for purchasing equipment and conducting field tests in desert areas.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

Theproposed research project wis proposed to be conducted toll explore the effects of renewable energy sources in the United Arab Emirates. It is believed that significant advancements can be achieved inby reducing carbon emissions through the implementation of solar and wind technologies. The project will be funded by the National Science Foundation, and it is expected thatthe results wishall be shared with the scientific community to enhance understanding of sustainable practices.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed the passive voice to active voice in one or two phrases. Overall, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

The proposed research project will explore the effects of renewable energy sources in the United Arab Emirates. It is believed that significant advancements can be achieved by reducing carbon emissions through the implementation of solar and wind technologies. The project will be funded by the National Science Foundation, and the results shall be shared with the scientific community to enhance understanding of sustainable practices.

The research project is proposed to be conducted to explore the effects of renewable energy sources in the United Arab Emirates. It is believed that significant advancements can be achieved in reducing carbon emissions through the implementation of solar and wind technologies. The project will be funded by the National Science Foundation, and it is expected that the results will be shared with the scientific community to enhance understanding of sustainable practices.