Common English Mistakes in Ad Copies by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Ad Copy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of passive voice

Discover the luxury that isoffered by our new beachfront resort in Dubai. Every detail haisbeen designed to ensure that your stay is rememberedyour stay as a unique experience. TWe provide the finest amenities are provided, andour exceptional service is guaranteed to make your vacation unforgettable.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"I made changes mainly to cut down on the use of passive voice."

Discover the luxury of our new beachfront resort in Dubai. Every detail is designed to ensure that you remember your stay as a unique experience. We provide the finest amenities and our exceptional service is guaranteed to make your vacation unforgettable.

Discover the luxury that is offered by our new beachfront resort in Dubai. Every detail has been designed to ensure that your stay is remembered as a unique experience. The finest amenities are provided, and exceptional service is guaranteed to make your vacation unforgettable.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Discoverthe luxury of Dubai withan exclusive offer from our travel agency. Bookan unforgettable journey to the city of dreams and enjoy astay ata five-star hotel with breathtaking views. Don't miss thechance to explore thewonders ofthe desert and experiencean adventure like never before.

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"This is a good write-up overall. However, don't forget to use prepositions correctly in your sentences. For example, "Discover luxury of Dubai with exclusive offer from our travel agency." should be "Discover the luxury of Dubai with an exclusive offer from our travel agency." and "Book unforgettable journey" should be "Book an unforgettable journey"."

Discover the luxury of Dubai with an exclusive offer from our travel agency. Book an unforgettable journey to the city of dreams and enjoy a stay at a five-star hotel with breathtaking views. Don't miss the chance to explore the wonders of the desert and experience an adventure like never before.

Discover luxury of Dubai with exclusive offer from our travel agency. Book unforgettable journey to the city of dreams and enjoy stay at five-star hotel with breathtaking views. Don't miss chance to explore wonders of desert and experience adventure like never before.