Common English Mistakes in Motivational Speeches by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Motivational Speech in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using overly formal or direct language

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Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I made some stylistic changes to give it a slightly less formal (but still professional) tone."

Ladies and gentlemen, success is not just a matter of luck. It is a result of hard work and determination. You must pursue your goals diligently and never allow obstacles to steer you away from your path. Stay focused and disciplined in all your endeavors to achieve your desired outcomes.

Ladies and gentlemen, I am here to inform you that success is not a matter of luck, but a result of hard work and determination. You must pursue your goals with utmost diligence and never allow obstacles to deter you from your path. It is imperative that you maintain focus and discipline in all your endeavors to achieve the desired outcome.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Dear fFriends, tToday I want to sharewith you a message of hope and strengthwith you. There isare many challenges in life, but remember, there isare always opportunityies to grow. When you arefaced with difficulties, knowremember that there is muchplenty of support around you, and together, we can achieve great things.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I just replaced a word or two to make the English sound more natural. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Dear Friends, Today I want to share a message of hope and strength with you. There are many challenges in life, but remember, there are always opportunities to grow. When you are faced with difficulties, remember that there is plenty of support around you, and together, we can achieve great things.

Dear friends, today I want to share with you a message of hope and strength. There is many challenges in life, but remember, there is always opportunity to grow. When you face difficulties, know that there is much support around you, and together, we can achieve great things.

Mistake Example #3

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Dear fFriends, tTodayI want to share something very important. It is important to believe in yourself and your dreams. When youface challenges, remember that it is your determination that will lead to success.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed corrections for omitted sentence subjects."

Dear Friends, Today I want to share something very important. It is important to believe in yourself and your dreams. When you face challenges, remember that it is your determination that will lead to success.

Dear friends, today want to share something very important. Is important to believe in yourself and your dreams. When face challenges, remember that is your determination that will lead to success.