Common English Mistakes in Policy Briefs by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Policy Brief in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Ina recent policy review,the government has identified theneed fora comprehensive strategy to improve public transportation in urban areas. IThe initiative aims to reduce traffic congestion and promote theuse of sustainable transport options. By implementing aplan, we expect to enhance the quality of life for residents and support economic growth in theregion.

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"This is a good write-up overall. However, don't forget to use articles in your sentences. For example, "In recent policy review" should be "In a recent policy review" and "government has identified need" should be "the government has identified the need"."

In a recent policy review, the government has identified the need for a comprehensive strategy to improve public transportation in urban areas. The initiative aims to reduce traffic congestion and promote the use of sustainable transport options. By implementing a plan, we expect to enhance the quality of life for residents and support economic growth in the region.

In recent policy review, government has identified need for comprehensive strategy to improve public transportation in urban areas. Initiative aims to reduce traffic congestion and promote use of sustainable transport options. By implementing plan, we expect to enhance quality of life for residents and support economic growth in region.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

The policy regarding renewable energy initiatives was discussed extensively in the recent meeting. It was decided that mMore solar panels will be installed acrossthe urban areas to increase energy efficiency. TMeeting participants emphasized the importance of reducing carbon emissions was emphasized,andit was agreed thao conduct further research into sustainable practiceswill be conducted.

Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA

"I have swapped active voice for passive voice in several places to make your writing stronger. "

The policy regarding renewable energy initiatives was discussed extensively in the recent meeting. More solar panels will be installed across urban areas to increase energy efficiency. Meeting participants emphasized the importance of reducing carbon emissions and agreed to conduct further research into sustainable practices.

The policy regarding renewable energy initiatives was discussed extensively in the recent meeting. It was decided that more solar panels will be installed across the urban areas to increase energy efficiency. The importance of reducing carbon emissions was emphasized, and it was agreed that further research into sustainable practices will be conducted.