Common English Mistakes in Dissertations by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Dissertation in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

In this dissertation, Iam honored to inform you that the research conducted has been of utmostsignificance in the field of renewable energy. It is with great proudleasure that Iy present the findings, which I am confident will contribute to the academic community in a profound manner. I am privileged to have had the opportunity to explore this topic, andI am deeply grateful for theesteemed guidance of my supervisors throughout this scholarly journey.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"I just made a few minor changes to make the writing sound a bit more natural :)"

In this dissertation, I inform you that the research conducted has been of significance in the field of renewable energy. I proudly present the findings, which I am confident will contribute to the academic community in a profound manner. I am privileged to have had the opportunity to explore this topic and grateful for the guidance of my supervisors throughout this scholarly journey.

In this dissertation, I am honored to inform you that the research conducted has been of utmost significance in the field of renewable energy. It is with great pleasure that I present the findings, which I am confident will contribute to the academic community in a profound manner. I am privileged to have had the opportunity to explore this topic, and I am deeply grateful for the esteemed guidance of my supervisors throughout this scholarly journey.

Mistake Example #2

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

In this dissertation, I will explore the impact of climate change on agriculture in Saudi Arabia. The fFarmers must adapt theisr practices to ensure sthey can continue to produce crops efficiently. This study will analyze how they can implement sustainable techniques to mitigate the effects of climate change on their farms.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed the pronouns to "they" to agree with the noun "farmers.""

In this dissertation, I will explore the impact of climate change on agriculture in Saudi Arabia. Farmers must adapt their practices to ensure they can continue to produce crops efficiently. This study will analyze how they can implement sustainable techniques to mitigate the effects of climate change on their farms.

In this dissertation, I will explore the impact of climate change on agriculture in Saudi Arabia. The farmer must adapt his practices to ensure she can continue to produce crops efficiently. This study will analyze how he can implement sustainable techniques to mitigate the effects of climate change on her farm.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

In this dissertation, I explore how the economic policies in Saudi Arabia affect the growth of small businesses. The research focuses on the period between 2010 and 2020, where significant changes occur in the market dynamics. I analyze how these policies impact the business environment and what strategies are adopted by entrepreneurs to adapt. The findings show that while some policies encourage growth, others create challenges that need to be addressed.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed one word to correct the verb tense. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

In this dissertation, I explore how the economic policies in Saudi Arabia affect the growth of small businesses. The research focuses on the period between 2010 and 2020, where significant changes occur in the market dynamics. I analyze how these policies impact the business environment and what strategies are adopted by entrepreneurs to adapt. The findings show that while some policies encourage growth, others create challenges that need to be addressed.

In this dissertation, I explore how the economic policies in Saudi Arabia affect the growth of small businesses. The research focus on the period between 2010 and 2020, where significant changes occur in the market dynamics. I analyze how these policies impact the business environment and what strategies are adopted by entrepreneurs to adapt. The findings show that while some policies encourage growth, others create challenges that need to be addressed.