Common English Mistakes in Motivational Speeches by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Motivational Speech in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Dear friends, today I stand before you to remind you ofthe power within each of us. We often think we need perfect conditions to succeed, but the truth is, we already have strength and determination. Just like abird that flies againstthe wind, we too can rise aboveour challenges. Believe in yourself and take astep forward, because the future is waiting for you to shape it.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I added articles before certain nouns according to proper English grammar. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Dear friends, today I stand before you to remind you of the power within each of us. We often think we need perfect conditions to succeed, but the truth is, we already have strength and determination. Just like a bird that flies against the wind, we too can rise above our challenges. Believe in yourself and take a step forward, because the future is waiting for you to shape it.

Dear friends, today I stand before you to remind you of power within each of us. We often think we need perfect conditions to succeed, but truth is, we already have strength and determination. Just like bird that flies against wind, we too can rise above challenges. Believe in yourself and take step forward, because future is waiting for you to shape it.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

Ladies and gentlemen, it is believed thatsuccess ibelongs achieved byto those who are determined and persistent. ThEveryone faces challengesare faced by everyone, but it is theyour courage that is shown by you that willmakes the difference. Remember, the dreams are realized by those who dare to pursue their dreams with passion and dedicationare the one who realize them. LEmbracet the journeybe embraced by you, and letthe obstacles be overcome by your unwavering spiritovercome every obstacle.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to remove instances of passive voice."

Ladies and gentlemen, success belongs to those who are determined and persistent. Everyone faces challenges, but your courage makes the difference. Remember, those who pursue their dreams with passion and dedication are the one who realize them. Embrace the journey, and let your unwavering spirit overcome every obstacle.

Ladies and gentlemen, it is believed that success is achieved by those who are determined and persistent. The challenges are faced by everyone, but it is the courage that is shown by you that will make the difference. Remember, the dreams are realized by those who dare to pursue them with passion and dedication. Let the journey be embraced by you, and let the obstacles be overcome by your unwavering spirit.