This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Newsletter in English.
Overuse of passive voice
Dear Subscribers, We witll isbe lannounced thating our new product linewill be launched next month. The latest innovations are being showcased in our upcoming event, and exclusive offers are being provided to attendees. YWe highly encourage your participation is highly encouraged,andfeedback is always appreciateyour feedback to improve our services.
Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I changed the passive voice to active voice in some phrases. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."
Dear Subscribers, We will be launching our new product line next month. The latest innovations are being showcased in our upcoming event, and exclusive offers are being provided to attendees. We highly encourage your participation and always appreciate your feedback to improve our services.
Dear Subscribers, it is announced that our new product line will be launched next month. The latest innovations are being showcased in our upcoming event, and exclusive offers are being provided to attendees. Your participation is highly encouraged, and feedback is always appreciated to improve our services.
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
Dear Subscribers,wWe are excited to announce thelaunch ofour new product line this month. Our team has worked hard to bring youthe best quality items that meet your needs. Visit our store in Dubai to explore ourcollection and enjoy exclusive offers available only for alimited time. Don't miss thisopportunity to be amongthe first to experience innovation and style.!
Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Very good! I just needed to add some missing articles."
Dear Subscribers, We are excited to announce the launch of our new product line this month. Our team has worked hard to bring you the best quality items that meet your needs. Visit our store in Dubai to explore our collection and enjoy exclusive offers available only for a limited time. Don't miss this opportunity to be among the first to experience innovation and style!
Dear Subscribers, we are excited to announce launch of new product line this month. Our team has worked hard to bring you best quality items that meet your needs. Visit our store in Dubai to explore collection and enjoy exclusive offers available only for limited time. Don't miss opportunity to be among first to experience innovation and style.