Common English Mistakes in Ad Copies by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Ad Copy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

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Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability, and to add sentence subjects ("it"). "

Discover new worlds of flavor with our premium tea collection. It's perfect for sharing with friends or relaxing alone after a long day. Experience the taste of tradition and quality, crafted with care in Taiwan. Don't miss this special offer—order now and enjoy free shipping!

Discover new world of flavors with our premium tea collection. Is perfect for relaxing after long day or sharing with friends. Experience the taste of tradition and quality, crafted with care in Taiwan. Don't miss special offer, order now and enjoy free shipping!

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Discover the secret to glowing skin with our new skincare line! There isare many products thato suit every skin type, ensuring you achieve the perfect complexion. Don't miss out on this opportunity to transform your skincare routine with our innovative formula.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking for proper usage of singular vs. plural nouns."

Discover the secret to glowing skin with our new skincare line! There are many products to suit every skin type, ensuring you achieve the perfect complexion. Don't miss out on this opportunity to transform your skincare routine with our innovative formula.

Discover the secret to glowing skin with our new skincare line! There is many product that suit every skin type, ensuring you achieve the perfect complexion. Don't miss out on this opportunity to transform your skincare routine with our innovative formula.

Mistake Example #3

Using overly formal or direct language

Experience the ultimate in skincare perfection with our new facial cream. This product is designed to proejuvide you with the most excellenatresults, ensuring your skin will be rejuvenatedandmake it look more youthful. Please pBurchasey now to enjoy the superior benefits that will enhance your beautyin a very effective manner.

Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA

"I've toned down the excessive formality, so it sounds a bit more natural. "

Experience the ultimate in skincare perfection with our new facial cream. This product is designed to rejuvenate your skin and make it look more youthful. Buy now to enjoy the superior benefits that will enhance your beauty.

Experience the ultimate in skincare perfection with our new facial cream. This product is designed to provide you with the most excellent results, ensuring your skin will be rejuvenated and youthful. Please purchase now to enjoy the superior benefits that will enhance your beauty in a very effective manner.