Common English Mistakes in Linkedin Profiles by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a LinkedIn Profile in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using overly formal or direct language

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Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"Changes were made to reduce overly formal language."

I’m a dedicated and hard-working marketing professional with solid experience in the field. I’m excited about the opportunity to bring my skills to your company and help make your projects a success. In my previous role as a marketing specialist at a well-known firm, I led strategic campaigns and made sure they were executed effectively and on point.

As a highly dedicated and industrious professional, I am possessing extensive experience in the field of marketing. I am eager to contribute my skills to your esteemed company and ensure the success of all projects. My previous role was Marketing Specialist at a prestigious firm, where I was responsible for executing strategic campaigns with utmost precision.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Experienced marketing specialist with over five years of experience in digital marketing strategies. There isare many successful campaigns I have managed, leading to significant increases in brand awareness and customer engagement. I am passionate about creating innovative solutions and there are muchany skills I can bring to your team.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking for proper usage of singular vs. plural nouns."

Experienced marketing specialist with over five years of experience in digital marketing strategies. There are many successful campaigns I have managed, leading to significant increases in brand awareness and customer engagement. I am passionate about creating innovative solutions and there are many skills I can bring to your team.

Experienced marketing specialist with over five years of experience in digital marketing strategies. There is many successful campaigns I have managed, leading to significant increase in brand awareness and customer engagement. I am passionate about creating innovative solutions and there are much skills I can bring to your team.

Mistake Example #3

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

EI am an experienced software engineer witha strong background in developing mobile applications. WI have worked on various projects that improve user experience and increase efficiency. PI am passionate about technology and innovation,and believeit is crucial to stay updated with thelatest trends. EI enjoy collaborating witha team to achieve common goals and deliver high-quality products.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was well-written – I just made a few minor changes to complete the sentences :) "

I am an experienced software engineer with a strong background in developing mobile applications. I have worked on various projects that improve user experience and increase efficiency. I am passionate about technology and innovation and believe it is crucial to stay updated with the latest trends. I enjoy collaborating with a team to achieve common goals and deliver high-quality products.

Experienced software engineer with strong background in developing mobile applications. Worked on various projects that improve user experience and increase efficiency. Passionate about technology and innovation, believe is crucial to stay updated with latest trends. Enjoy collaborating with team to achieve common goals and deliver high-quality products.