Common English Mistakes in Landing Page Copies by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Landing Page Copy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

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Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"This is well-written overall. However, remember to use subjects in your sentences. For example, "Offers best tools" should be "It offers best tools" and "Is designed" should be "It is designed"."

Welcome to our language learning platform! It offers the best tools for improving English skills. It is designed to help you practice speaking, listening, and writing with ease. Join today and see how easy it is to become confident in English communication.

Welcome to our language learning platform! Offers best tools for improving English skills. Is designed to help you practice speaking, listening, and writing with ease. Join today and see how easy is to become confident in English communication.

Mistake Example #2

Using overly formal or direct language

Welcome to ouresteemed online store, where weare honored to present you with the finest selection of electronic gadgets. It is our sincerWe hope that you will find our products to be of the highest quality and that they will meet your esteemed expectations. Please feel free to contact us directly shouldif you require any further assistance or have any inquiries regarding our offerings.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was very well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make the copy sound a bit less formal :) "

Welcome to our online store, where we present you with the finest selection of electronic gadgets. We hope that you will find our products to be of the highest quality and that they will meet your expectations. Please feel free to contact us directly if you require any further assistance or have any inquiries regarding our offerings.

Welcome to our esteemed online store, where we are honored to present you with the finest selection of electronic gadgets. It is our sincere hope that you will find our products to be of the highest quality and that they will meet your esteemed expectations. Please feel free to contact us directly should you require any further assistance or have any inquiries regarding our offerings.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Welcome to our travel website, where there isare many exciting destinations waiting for you. Discover the beauty of Taiwanwith—its rich culture and delicious food thatattract a large numuchber of visitors every year. Whether you are lookaiming for adventure or ready for relaxation, thereare's something for everyone to enjoy.!

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some fixes to correct the use of singular and plural nouns, and a few wording changes for polish."

Welcome to our travel website, where there are many exciting destinations waiting for you. Discover the beauty of Taiwan—its rich culture and delicious food attract a large number of visitors every year. Whether you are aiming for adventure or ready for relaxation, there's something for everyone to enjoy!

Welcome to our travel website, where there is many exciting destination waiting for you. Discover the beauty of Taiwan with its rich culture and delicious food that attract much visitor every year. Whether you are looking for adventure or relaxation, there are something for everyone to enjoy.