Common English Mistakes in Slogans by Italian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing a Slogan in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

"With our pasta, you willmakethe good figure at every dinnergreat! Taste the tradition, feel the passion, and bring home the Italyian flavors. Choose us, and you will not regret it!"

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I just changed a few words to make the English sound more natural. Great job!"

"With our pasta, you will make every dinner great! Taste the tradition, feel the passion, and bring home the Italian flavors. Choose us, and you will not regret it!"

"With our pasta, you make the good figure at every dinner! Taste the tradition, feel the passion, and bring home the Italy. Choose us, and you will not regret it!"

Mistake Example #2

Confusing singular and plural nouns

"Experience the taste of Italy with our pasta that brings joy to every meal. Our sauce areis crafted with love and tradition, making your dinner a celebration of flavor. Choose our product and let the authentic Italian taste fill your kitchen with happiness."

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"This is mostly great, but please be mindful of the following: "our pasta that bring joy" should be "our pasta that brings joy" and "Our sauce are crafted" should be "Our sauce is crafted"."

"Experience the taste of Italy with our pasta that brings joy to every meal. Our sauce is crafted with love and tradition, making your dinner a celebration of flavor. Choose our product and let the authentic Italian taste fill your kitchen with happiness."

"Experience the taste of Italy with our pasta that bring joy to every meal. Our sauce are crafted with love and tradition, making your dinner a celebration of flavor. Choose our product and let the authentic Italian taste fill your kitchen with happiness."

Mistake Example #3

Overuse of passive voice

"YOur products are making your dreams are being made a realitywith our products. The future is being shaped by iInnovation and qualityare shaping the future. Choose us,—we whguarantere excellence is being guaranteedevery day."

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to reduce the use of passive voice."

"Our products are making your dreams a reality. Innovation and quality are shaping the future. Choose us—we guarantee excellence every day."

"Your dreams are being made a reality with our products. The future is being shaped by innovation and quality. Choose us, where excellence is being guaranteed every day."