Common English Mistakes in Tiktok Scripts by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a TikTok Script in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Hey everyone! Today I want to show you my new phone. I justgot it yesterday and it is amazing.! Inow havea phone withthe best camera, and I am so excited to take pictures. Also, I will show you how to makea delicious Emirati dish. It is called machboos, and it is very easy to cook. Stay tuned for more!

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Very nice! I just needed to add some articles and polish it up a bit."

Hey everyone! Today I want to show you my new phone. I just got it yesterday and it is amazing! I now have a phone with the best camera, and I am so excited to take pictures. Also, I will show you how to make a delicious Emirati dish. It is called machboos, and it is very easy to cook. Stay tuned for more!

Hey everyone! Today I want to show you my new phone. I got it yesterday and it is amazing. I have phone with best camera, and I am so excited to take pictures. Also, I will show you how to make delicious Emirati dish. It is called machboos, and it is very easy to cook. Stay tuned for more!

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

Hey everyone! Today, I am sharinga new recipe is being shared by me for the best Emirati dessert, Luqaimat. First, preparethe doughis prepared by mixing flour, yeast, and sugar. Then, formsmall balls are formed and friedy until golden. Finally, drizzlethe syrupis drizzled over them, and they are ready to be enjoyed. Don't forget to like and follow for more delicious recipes!

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the phrases from the passive voice to the active voice. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Hey everyone! Today, I am sharing a new recipe for the best Emirati dessert, Luqaimat. First, prepare the dough by mixing flour, yeast, and sugar. Then, form small balls and fry until golden. Finally, drizzle the syrup over them, and they are ready to be enjoyed. Don't forget to like and follow for more delicious recipes!

Hey everyone! Today, a new recipe is being shared by me for the best Emirati dessert, Luqaimat. First, the dough is prepared by mixing flour, yeast, and sugar. Then, small balls are formed and fried until golden. Finally, the syrup is drizzled over them, and they are ready to be enjoyed. Don't forget to like and follow for more delicious recipes!