Common English Mistakes in Press Releases by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Press Release in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Exciting news from Taipei! LThe launch ofa new smartphone modelis happening next month. It is designed to offerthe best user experience with advanced features. Join us for anexclusive event where we will showcase innovative technology and design. Don't miss theopportunity to be part of this groundbreaking moment.

Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA

"Don't forget to use subjects in your sentences."

Exciting news from Taipei! The launch of a new smartphone model is happening next month. It is designed to offer the best user experience with advanced features. Join us for an exclusive event where we will showcase innovative technology and design. Don't miss the opportunity to be part of this groundbreaking moment.

Exciting news from Taipei! Launch of new smartphone model happening next month. Is designed to offer best user experience with advanced features. Join us for exclusive event where will showcase innovative technology and design. Don't miss opportunity to be part of this groundbreaking moment.

Mistake Example #2

Using overly formal or direct language

Esteemed Members of the Press, it is with great honorand utmost sincerity that we announce the grand opening of our new flagship store in Taipei. We cordially invite you to attend thismonumental event, where you will witness firsthand the unparalleled quality and exceptional service that our brand is renowned for. Your presence wioulld be muchighly appreciated and will contribute significantly to the success of this occasion.

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"Just a few small changes were needed. I made changes to tone down the formal language as it was a bit much."

Esteemed Members of the Press, it is with great honor that we announce the grand opening of our new flagship store in Taipei. We cordially invite you to attend this event, where you will witness firsthand the unparalleled quality and exceptional service that our brand is renowned for. Your presence would be much appreciated and will contribute significantly to the success of this occasion.

Esteemed Members of the Press, it is with great honor and utmost sincerity that we announce the grand opening of our new flagship store in Taipei. We cordially invite you to attend this monumental event, where you will witness firsthand the unparalleled quality and exceptional service that our brand is renowned for. Your presence will be highly appreciated and will contribute significantly to the success of this occasion.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

For Immediate Release: Taipei, Taiwan – We are excited to announce the grand opening of our new flagship store in the heart of Taipei. There isare many exciting promotions and exclusive offers available ftor our valued customers. Our team haves worked hard to ensure that there are muchany unique products and experiences waiting for you. Join us on opening day to enjoy special discounts and meet our friendly staff.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Very nice! I just fixed some issues with singular/plural nouns."

For Immediate Release: Taipei, Taiwan – We are excited to announce the grand opening of our new flagship store in the heart of Taipei. There are many exciting promotions and exclusive offers available to our valued customers. Our team has worked hard to ensure that there are many unique products and experiences waiting for you. Join us on opening day to enjoy special discounts and meet our friendly staff.

For Immediate Release: Taipei, Taiwan – We are excited to announce the grand opening of our new flagship store in the heart of Taipei. There is many exciting promotions and exclusive offers available for our valued customers. Our team have worked hard to ensure that there are much unique products and experiences waiting for you. Join us on opening day to enjoy special discounts and meet our friendly staff.