This page focuses on errors typically made by native Cantonese speakers from Hong Kong when writing in English.
| Category: | Academic Writing Writing used in educational and research settings. |
| Common Users: | Students, Researchers, Professors. |
Academic Writing / Academic Journal Article
Confusion with countable vs. uncountable nouns ('She has much friends')
In recent years, there ismuch researchhas been conducted on the impact of social media on adolescent behavior. Many studies suggest that social media platforms have asignificant influence on how young people perceive themselves and their peers. However, there isare still many questions about the long-term effects of this exposure, and more data isare needed to draw definitive conclusions.
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Vince, United States
"Very good! Just a couple of changes to make the text consistent."
In recent years, much research has been conducted on the impact of social media on adolescent behavior. Many studies suggest that social media platforms have a significant influence on how young people perceive themselves and their peers. However, there are still many questions about the long-term effects of this exposure, and more data are needed to draw definitive conclusions.
In recent years, there is much research conducted on the impact of social media on adolescent behavior. Many studies suggest that social media platforms have significant influence on how young people perceive themselves and their peers. However, there is still many questions about the long-term effects of this exposure, and more data is needed to draw definitive conclusions.
Academic Writing / Book Review
Overuse of direct translations from Cantonese
The book "The Great Adventure" is very good, and I like it very much. The story is about a boy who goes to the mountains to find his lost dog, and he meets many interesting people on the way. I think the author writes very well, and the book makde me feel very excitinged.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to sound more native and natural."
The book "The Great Adventure" is very good, and I like it very much. The story is about a boy who goes to the mountains to find his lost dog, and he meets many interesting people on the way. I think the author writes very well, and the book made me feel very excited.
The book "The Great Adventure" is very good, and I like it very much. The story is about a boy who go to the mountain to find his lost dog, and he meet many interesting people on the way. I think the author write very well, and the book make me feel very exciting.
Academic Writing / Conference Paper
Overuse of 'very' to emphasize adjectives
In this study, we explore the very important effects of climate change on urban environments, which harve becoming very significant in recent years. The data collected from various sources is verycomprehensive and provides avery detailed understanding of the challenges faced by cities like Hong Kong. Our findings suggest that implementing veryeffective policies is crucial to mitigate these veryserious impacts and ensure avery sustainable future for urban populations.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Your paper reads better without so many uses of "very", so I took them out. Good work overall!"
In this study, we explore the very important effects of climate change on urban environments, which have become significant in recent years. The data collected from various sources is comprehensive and provides a detailed understanding of the challenges faced by cities like Hong Kong. Our findings suggest that implementing effective policies is crucial to mitigate these serious impacts and ensure a sustainable future for urban populations.
In this study, we explore the very important effects of climate change on urban environments, which are becoming very significant in recent years. The data collected from various sources is very comprehensive and provides a very detailed understanding of the challenges faced by cities like Hong Kong. Our findings suggest that implementing very effective policies is crucial to mitigate these very serious impacts and ensure a very sustainable future for urban populations.
Academic Writing / Dissertation
Confusion with countable vs. uncountable nouns ('She has much friends')
In this dissertation, the research focuses on the impact of social media on youth culture in Hong Kong. There is much evidence to suggest that social media platforms have asignificant influence on how theyoung peopleth perceive their identity and relationships. Many youthng people spend mucha lot of time engaging with these platforms, which leads to changes in communication patterns and social interactions. The study aims to explore these dynamics and provide insight into how digital environments shape modern youth experiences.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking for countable vs. uncountable nouns, among other fixes."
In this dissertation, the research focuses on the impact of social media on youth culture in Hong Kong. There is much evidence to suggest that social media platforms have a significant influence on how the youth perceive their identity and relationships. Many young people spend a lot of time engaging with these platforms, which leads to changes in communication patterns and social interactions. The study aims to explore these dynamics and provide insight into how digital environments shape modern youth experiences.
In this dissertation, the research focus on the impact of social media on youth culture in Hong Kong. There is much evidence to suggest that social media platforms have significant influence on how young people perceive their identity and relationships. Many youth spend much time engaging with these platforms, which lead to changes in communication patterns and social interactions. The study aims to explore these dynamics and provide insight into how digital environments shape modern youth experiences.
Academic Writing / Essay
Confusion with countable vs. uncountable nouns ('She has much friends')
In recent years, there ihasbeen much debate about the impact of technology on education. Many students in Hong Kong believe that technology provides numerouchs benefits, such as access to information and interactive learning tools. However, there are also muchany challenges, including the distraction it can cause and the need for muchltiple resources to implement technologyeffectively in schools.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Good work! I fixed some issues with much/many and polished up the text."
In recent years, there has been much debate about the impact of technology on education. Many students in Hong Kong believe that technology provides numerous benefits, such as access to information and interactive learning tools. However, there are also many challenges, including the distraction it can cause and the need for multiple resources to implement technology effectively in schools.
In recent years, there is much debate about the impact of technology on education. Many students in Hong Kong believe that technology provides much benefits, such as access to information and interactive learning tools. However, there are also much challenges, including the distraction it can cause and the need for much resources to implement effectively in schools.
Academic Writing / Lab Report
Overuse of direct translations from Cantonese
In this experiment, we are using thea new chemical to see its reaction with water. The result is not swhame ast we expected because the temperature is too high. We should haveadded more water to make it balanced, but we forgot to do so.
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Vince, United States
"Just a few minor tweaks to polish the text :) Nice work!"
In this experiment, we are using a new chemical to see its reaction with water. The result is not what we expected because the temperature is too high. We should have added more water to make it balanced, but we forgot to do so.
In this experiment, we are using the new chemical to see its reaction with water. The result is not same as we expected because the temperature is too high. We should add more water to make it balance, but we forgot to do so.
Academic Writing / Literature Review
Confusion with countable vs. uncountable nouns ('She has much friends')
In recent years, there ihasbeen much research conducted on the impact of social media on youth behavior. Many studies suggest that social media platforms have asignificant influence on how young people perceive themselves and others. However, there is still manyuch debate about whether these effects are mostly positive or negative. Some researchers argue that social media provides muchany opportunities for self-expression, while others believe it leads to much pressure to conform to unrealistic standards.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Nice job! I just made a few corrections, including some involving the words "much" and "many"."
In recent years, there has been much research conducted on the impact of social media on youth behavior. Many studies suggest that social media platforms have a significant influence on how young people perceive themselves and others. However, there is still much debate about whether these effects are mostly positive or negative. Some researchers argue that social media provides many opportunities for self-expression, while others believe it leads to much pressure to conform to unrealistic standards.
In recent years, there is much research conducted on the impact of social media on youth behavior. Many studies suggest that social media platforms have significant influence on how young people perceive themselves and others. However, there is still many debate about whether these effects are mostly positive or negative. Some researchers argue that social media provides much opportunities for self-expression, while others believe it leads to much pressure to conform to unrealistic standards.
Academic Writing / Research Paper
Confusion with countable vs. uncountable nouns ('She has much friends')
Ina recent study conducted at the University of Hong Kong, it was found that there isa significant amount of data supporting the hypothesis. The research involved many participants who were asked to provide feedback on various environmental issues. Although there is much evidence to suggest that pollution levels are rising, there is still afew solutions being implemented to address the problem effectively.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"This is mostly well-written. However, be mindful of errors such as the following: "In recent study" should be "In a recent study" and "many participant" should be "many participants"."
In a recent study conducted at the University of Hong Kong, it was found that there is a significant amount of data supporting the hypothesis. The research involved many participants who were asked to provide feedback on various environmental issues. Although there is much evidence to suggest that pollution levels are rising, there is still a few solutions being implemented to address the problem effectively.
In recent study conducted at the University of Hong Kong, it was found that there is significant amount of data supporting the hypothesis. The research involved many participant who were asked to provide feedback on various environmental issues. Although there is much evidence to suggest that pollution levels are rising, there is still few solution being implemented to address the problem effectively.
Academic Writing / Thesis
Overuse of 'very' to emphasize adjectives
The research findings indicate that the results are verysignificant andvery important for the field of environmental science. The data collected was verycomprehensive, providing avery detailed analysis of the pollution levels in Hong Kong. This study is veryunique because it offers avery new perspective on the impact of urban development on air quality.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Good work overall! The word "very" was not necessary and it makes the text sound less professional, so I took it out."
The research findings indicate that the results are significant and important for the field of environmental science. The data collected was comprehensive, providing a detailed analysis of the pollution levels in Hong Kong. This study is unique because it offers a new perspective on the impact of urban development on air quality.
The research findings indicate that the results are very significant and very important for the field of environmental science. The data collected was very comprehensive, providing a very detailed analysis of the pollution levels in Hong Kong. This study is very unique because it offers a very new perspective on the impact of urban development on air quality.