Common English Mistakes in Feature Stories by German Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native German speakers from Germany when writing a Feature Story in English.

Mistake Example #1

Incorrect word order in subordinate clauses

In the heart of Berlin, a new art exhibition has opened that promises to challenge the way we think about modern art. The curator, who has spent years studying the intersection of technology and creativity, believes that when artists and engineers collaborate, new possibilities are created. She explained that the exhibition aims to show how, when technology and art meet, boundaries are pushed and new forms of expression emerge. Visitors can expect to see installations that, not only engage the senses, but also provoke thought about the future of art in a digital age.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I'd probably make stylistic changes to this text, but there isn't anything obviously wrong with it."

In the heart of Berlin, a new art exhibition has opened that promises to challenge the way we think about modern art. The curator, who has spent years studying the intersection of technology and creativity, believes that when artists and engineers collaborate, new possibilities are created. She explained that the exhibition aims to show how, when technology and art meet, boundaries are pushed and new forms of expression emerge. Visitors can expect to see installations that, not only engage the senses, but also provoke thought about the future of art in a digital age.

In the heart of Berlin, a new art exhibition has opened that promises to challenge the way we think about modern art. The curator, who has spent years studying the intersection of technology and creativity, believes that when artists and engineers collaborate, new possibilities are created. She explained that the exhibition aims to show how, when technology and art meet, boundaries are pushed and new forms of expression emerge. Visitors can expect to see installations that, not only engage the senses, but also provoke thought about the future of art in a digital age.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

In the heart of Berlin, a new art exhibition wasopened last week,. and it was attended by hHundreds of art enthusiastsattended. TVisitors from all over the world admired how the gallery was filled with vibrant colors and innovative installations, which were admired by visitors from all over the world. The event was organized by a local artist, whose work is inspired by the dynamic culture of the city, and it was praised for its unique approach to contemporary art.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I changed some of the passive voice constructions to the active voice to improve readability. Well done!"

In the heart of Berlin, a new art exhibition opened last week. Hundreds of art enthusiasts attended. Visitors from all over the world admired how the gallery was filled with vibrant colors and innovative installations. The event was organized by a local artist, whose work is inspired by the dynamic culture of the city, and it was praised for its unique approach to contemporary art.

In the heart of Berlin, a new art exhibition was opened last week, and it was attended by hundreds of art enthusiasts. The gallery was filled with vibrant colors and innovative installations, which were admired by visitors from all over the world. The event was organized by a local artist, whose work is inspired by the dynamic culture of the city, and it was praised for its unique approach to contemporary art.

Mistake Example #3

Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)

In the Hheart of Berlin, the Ccity is Aalive with the Ssound of Mmusic and the Aaroma of Ffreshly Bbrewed Ccoffee. Every Mmorning, the Sstreets are Ffilled with Ppeople Hheading to their Ffavorite Ccafé, where the Bbarista knows their Oorder by Hheart. The Wweekend brings a Bbuzz of Aactivity, as Ffamilies and Ffriends gather in the Pparks to enjoy the Ssunshine and the Jjoy of being Ttogether.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to correct capitalization errors."

In the heart of Berlin, the city is alive with the sound of music and the aroma of freshly brewed coffee. Every morning, the streets are filled with people heading to their favorite café, where the barista knows their order by heart. The weekend brings a buzz of activity, as families and friends gather in the parks to enjoy the sunshine and the joy of being together.

In the Heart of Berlin, the City is Alive with the Sound of Music and the Aroma of Freshly Brewed Coffee. Every Morning, the Streets are Filled with People Heading to their Favorite Café, where the Barista knows their Order by Heart. The Weekend brings a Buzz of Activity, as Families and Friends gather in the Parks to enjoy the Sunshine and the Joy of being Together.