This page focuses on errors typically made by native German speakers from Germany when writing in English.
| Category: | Job Applications & Professional Development Writing for job applications and career growth. |
| Common Users: | Job Seekers, Career Coaches. |
Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
In my Ccareer Portfolio, I have included several important Ddocuments that highlight my Sskills and Aachievements. My Eexperience in Pproject Mmanagement and Tteam Lleadership has been a significant Aasset in my Pprofessional Ddevelopment. I am confident that my Bbackground in Eengineering and my Ppassion for Iinnovation will enable me to make valuable Ccontributions to any Ccompany.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the capitalized nouns to lower case and polished up the last sentence, but otherwise this is well-written."
In my career Portfolio, I have included several important documents that highlight my skills and achievements. My experience in project management and team leadership has been a significant asset in my professional development. I am confident that my background in engineering and my passion for innovation will enable me to make valuable contributions to any company.
In my Career Portfolio, I have included several important Documents that highlight my Skills and Achievements. My Experience in Project Management and Team Leadership has been a significant Asset in my Professional Development. I am confident that my Background in Engineering and my Passion for Innovation will be valuable Contributions to any Company.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Cover Letter
Overuse of passive voice
Dear Hiring Manager,iIt is with great enthusiasm thatI am applying for the position of Marketing Specialist. isI have developplied for byme. My skills in digital marketing and project management have been developedextensively, and it isI believed by me that my abilithiese will be beneficial to your team. TI greatly anticipate the opportunity to contribute to your company's successis greatly anticipated by me, and I am looking forward to the possibility of furtherdiscussing my applicationfurther.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed the passive voice constructions to the active voice and made some stylistic improvements."
Dear Hiring Manager, It is with great enthusiasm that I am applying for the position of Marketing Specialist. I have developed my skills in digital marketing and project management extensively, and I believe that my abilities will be beneficial to your team. I greatly anticipate the opportunity to contribute to your company's success, and I am looking forward to the possibility of further discussing my application.
Dear Hiring Manager, it is with great enthusiasm that the position of Marketing Specialist is applied for by me. My skills in digital marketing and project management have been developed extensively, and it is believed by me that these will be beneficial to your team. The opportunity to contribute to your company's success is greatly anticipated by me, and I am looking forward to the possibility of discussing my application further.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Interview Follow-Up Email
Incorrect word order in subordinate clauses
Dear [Interviewer's Name],I wanted to express my gratitude for the opportunity to interview with your company. It was a pleasure to learn more about the team and the projects you are working on. If tyouherearve any further questionsyou have, please let me know. I am very excited about the possibility to join your team and contribute to the success of the company. Thank you again for the opportunity, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I tweaked the word order and made a few other minor corrections. Well done!"
Dear [Interviewer's Name], I wanted to express my gratitude for the opportunity to interview with your company. It was a pleasure to learn more about the team and the projects you are working on. If you have any further questions, please let me know. I am very excited about the possibility to join your team and contribute to the success of the company. Thank you again for the opportunity, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Dear [Interviewer's Name], I wanted to express my gratitude for the opportunity to interview with your company. It was a pleasure to learn more about the team and the projects you are working on. If there are any further questions you have, please let me know. I am very excited about the possibility to join your team and contribute to the success of the company. Thank you again for the opportunity, and I look forward to hear from you soon.
Job Applications & Professional Development / LinkedIn Profile
Overuse of passive voice
As a dedicated software engineer, a variety of projectsI havebeen successfully completed ba variety mof projects, including thedevelopmeint ofg a customer management system that was implemented byseveral companieshave implemented. MI continuously improve my skills in Java and Python are continuously improved, andnew technologies are regularly explorednew technologies to stay updated with industry trends.
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Camille, Maryland, USA
"There were several places where active voice should be used, as shown."
As a dedicated software engineer, I have successfully completed a variety of projects, including developing a customer management system that several companies have implemented. I continuously improve my skills in Java and Python and regularly explore new technologies to stay updated with industry trends.
As a dedicated software engineer, a variety of projects have been successfully completed by me, including the development of a customer management system that was implemented by several companies. My skills in Java and Python are continuously improved, and new technologies are regularly explored to stay updated with industry trends.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Personal Statement
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
I am Wwriting to express my Iinterest in the Pposition of Mmarketing Sspecialist at your esteemed Ccompany. My Eexperience in the Ffield of Ddigital Mmarketing and my Ppassion for innovative Sstrategies make me an ideal Ccandidate for this Rrole. I am eager to contribute my Sskills and Kknowledge to your Tteam and help drive the Ssuccess of your Bbusiness.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Capitals are not necessary for common nouns (non-specific people, places, things, or ideas)."
I am writing to express my interest in the position of marketing specialist at your esteemed company. My experience in the field of digital marketing and my passion for innovative strategies make me an ideal candidate for this role. I am eager to contribute my skills and knowledge to your team and help drive the success of your business.
I am Writing to express my Interest in the Position of Marketing Specialist at your esteemed Company. My Experience in the Field of Digital Marketing and my Passion for innovative Strategies make me an ideal Candidate for this Role. I am eager to contribute my Skills and Knowledge to your Team and help drive the Success of your Business.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Reference Letter
Overuse of passive voice
To Whom It May Concern,: it is with great pleasure that it isI recommended that Mr. Thomas Müller isbe considered for the position of Senior Engineer. His skills and dedication were consistently demonstratedhis skills and dedication during his time at our company, and it isI believed that he will be a valuable asset to your team. It is hoped that this letter provides the necessary insight into his capabilities and potential.
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Vince, United States
"Just a few minor tweaks to make the writing active and readable :) Great work! "
To Whom It May Concern: I recommend that Mr. Thomas Müller be considered for the position of Senior Engineer. He consistently demonstrated his skills and dedication during his time at our company, and I believe that he will be a valuable asset to your team. I hope that this letter provides the necessary insight into his capabilities and potential.
To Whom It May Concern, it is with great pleasure that it is recommended that Mr. Thomas Müller is considered for the position of Senior Engineer. His skills and dedication were consistently demonstrated during his time at our company, and it is believed that he will be a valuable asset to your team. It is hoped that this letter provides the necessary insight into his capabilities and potential.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Resume
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
Experienced Ssoftware Ddeveloper with a strong Bbackground in developing innovative Ssolutions for complex Bbusiness Pproblems. Skilled in Java, Python, and Ddatabase Mmanagement, with a proven Ttrack Rrecord of delivering high-quality Ssoftware on Ttime. Seeking a challenging Pposition in a dynamic Ccompany where I can utilize my Sskills and contribute to the Tteam's Ssuccess.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"This is well-written, but it had some issues with capitalization. Only the proper nouns (such as Java and Python) need to be capitalized in this context."
Experienced software developer with a strong background in developing innovative solutions for complex business problems. Skilled in Java, Python, and database management, with a proven track record of delivering high-quality software on time. Seeking a challenging position in a dynamic company where I can utilize my skills and contribute to the team's success.
Experienced Software Developer with a strong Background in developing innovative Solutions for complex Business Problems. Skilled in Java, Python, and Database Management, with a proven Track Record of delivering high-quality Software on Time. Seeking a challenging Position in a dynamic Company where I can utilize my Skills and contribute to the Team's Success.