Common English Mistakes by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing in English.

Category:Job Applications & Professional Development
Writing for job applications and career growth.
Common Users:Job Seekers, Career Coaches.
Mistake Example #1

Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

As a dedicated professional in the field of digital marketing, Ihave developed strong skills in SEO and content creation. It is crucialfor me to stay updated withon the latest trends, soI regularly attend workshops and webinars. BI believe that teamwork and communication are key to success, which is why Ialways strive to collaborate effectively with mycolleagues.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I added the subject in places where it was missing and made a few additional changes."

As a dedicated professional in the field of digital marketing, I have developed strong skills in SEO and content creation. It is crucial for me to stay updated on the latest trends, so I regularly attend workshops and webinars. I believe that teamwork and communication are key to success, which is why I always strive to collaborate effectively with my colleagues.

As a dedicated professional in the field of digital marketing, have developed strong skills in SEO and content creation. Is crucial to stay updated with the latest trends, so regularly attend workshops and webinars. Believe that teamwork and communication are key to success, which is why always strive to collaborate effectively with colleagues.

Mistake Example #2

Job Applications & Professional Development / Cover Letter

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Dear Hiring Manager,I am writing to express interest in the marketing position at your company. BI believeI have strong skills in digital marketing and social media management. GI graduated from National Taiwan University with a degree in Business Administration. IThisis an exciting opportunityfor me to contribute to your team and help achieve company goals. Thank you for considering my application.

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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Some of the sentences were missing a subject, so I added it where it is needed."

Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express interest in the marketing position at your company. I believe I have strong skills in digital marketing and social media management. I graduated from National Taiwan University with a degree in Business Administration. This is an exciting opportunity for me to contribute to your team and help achieve company goals. Thank you for considering my application.

Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express interest in the marketing position at your company. Believe have strong skills in digital marketing and social media management. Graduated from National Taiwan University with a degree in Business Administration. Is exciting opportunity to contribute to your team and help achieve company goals. Thank you for considering my application.

Mistake Example #3

Job Applications & Professional Development / Interview Follow-Up Email

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Dear Hiring Manager,I am very grateful forthe opportunity to interview with your company last week. There isare many aspects of the position that excite me, and I believe my skills area strong fit for the team. If there is any further information you need, please let me know. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"It actually does need corrections, but not the ones described in the note."

Dear Hiring Manager, I am very grateful for the opportunity to interview with your company last week. There are many aspects of the position that excite me, and I believe my skills are a strong fit for the team. If there is any further information you need, please let me know. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Dear Hiring Manager, I am very grateful for opportunity to interview with your company last week. There is many aspects of the position that excite me, and I believe my skills are strong fit for the team. If there is any further information you need, please let me know. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Mistake Example #4

Job Applications & Professional Development / LinkedIn Profile

Using overly formal or direct language

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Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"Changes were made to reduce overly formal language."

I’m a dedicated and hard-working marketing professional with solid experience in the field. I’m excited about the opportunity to bring my skills to your company and help make your projects a success. In my previous role as a marketing specialist at a well-known firm, I led strategic campaigns and made sure they were executed effectively and on point.

As a highly dedicated and industrious professional, I am possessing extensive experience in the field of marketing. I am eager to contribute my skills to your esteemed company and ensure the success of all projects. My previous role was Marketing Specialist at a prestigious firm, where I was responsible for executing strategic campaigns with utmost precision.

Mistake Example #5

Job Applications & Professional Development / Personal Statement

Using overly formal or direct language

I am writing to express myutmost interest in the position of Marketing Specialist at your esteemedcompany. I have accumulatedextensive experience in the field of marketing, and I am confident that my skills will contributesignificantly to your organization's success. I am eager to discuss how my background and qualifications align with the requirements of this role.

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Vince, United States

"This was well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make it sound a bit less formal :)"

I am writing to express my interest in the position of Marketing Specialist at your company. I have accumulated experience in the field of marketing, and I am confident that my skills will contribute to your organization's success. I am eager to discuss how my background and qualifications align with the requirements of this role.

I am writing to express my utmost interest in the position of Marketing Specialist at your esteemed company. I have accumulated extensive experience in the field of marketing, and I am confident that my skills will contribute significantly to your organization's success. I am eager to discuss how my background and qualifications align with the requirements of this role.

Mistake Example #6

Job Applications & Professional Development / Reference Letter

Using overly formal or direct language

To Whom It May Concern,I am writing this letter to strongly recommend Mr. Chen for the position inat youresteemed company. His performance in our department was exemplary, and he hasalways completed histasks withutmost precision. I am confident that he will be a valuable asset to your organization, and I urge you to consider his applicationwith highest priority.

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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I made some stylistic improvements to tone down the formality a bit while still remaining professional."

To Whom It May Concern, I am writing this letter to strongly recommend Mr. Chen for the position at your company. His performance in our department was exemplary, and he has always completed his tasks with precision. I am confident that he will be a valuable asset to your organization, and I urge you to consider his application.

To Whom It May Concern, I am writing this letter to strongly recommend Mr. Chen for the position in your esteemed company. His performance in our department was exemplary, and he always completed tasks with utmost precision. I am confident that he will be a valuable asset to your organization, and I urge you to consider his application with highest priority.

Mistake Example #7

Job Applications & Professional Development / Resume

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Objective-driven professional with over five years of experience in themarketing industry. I have developed many successful campaigns and havea strong ability to work with diverse team. My skills include creating innovative strategyies and analyzing market trends to improve brand visibility.

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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I fixed some issues with singular vs. plural and made a few other small changes."

Objective-driven professional with over five years of experience in the marketing industry. I have developed many successful campaigns and have a strong ability to work with diverse team. My skills include creating innovative strategies and analyzing market trends to improve brand visibility.

Objective-driven professional with over five years of experience in marketing industry. I have developed many successful campaign and have strong ability to work with diverse team. My skills include creating innovative strategy and analyzing market trend to improve brand visibility.