Common English Mistakes in Product Descriptions by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Product Description in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Introducinga new smartphone,the perfect choice forthe modern lifestyle. Witha sleek design and powerful features, thisphone offersthe best experience for theuser. Enjoyits high-quality camera and long-lasting battery life, making it anideal companion for every adventure.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Great job! I just filled in some missing articles plus a few other words."

Introducing a new smartphone, the perfect choice for the modern lifestyle. With a sleek design and powerful features, this phone offers the best experience for the user. Enjoy its high-quality camera and long-lasting battery life, making it an ideal companion for every adventure.

Introducing new smartphone, perfect choice for modern lifestyle. With sleek design and powerful features, phone offers best experience for user. Enjoy high-quality camera and long-lasting battery life, making it ideal companion for every adventure.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

Introducing the new Desert Breeze Perfume, a fragrancethat is inspired by the enchanting sands of the UAE. The scent is crafted with notes of jasmine and oud, andit is designed to evoke the essence of a serene desert evening. The bottle iselegantly designed, and ibotis madtleto captures the beauty of the Arabian landscape. This perfume is loved by those who appreciate luxury and sophistication, andit is recommended for both day and night wear.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the passive-voice phrases to active-voice phrases. Overall, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Introducing the new Desert Breeze Perfume, a fragrance inspired by the enchanting sands of the UAE. The scent is crafted with notes of jasmine and oud and is designed to evoke the essence of a serene desert evening. The elegantly designed bottle captures the beauty of the Arabian landscape. This perfume is loved by those who appreciate luxury and sophistication and is recommended for both day and night wear.

Introducing the new Desert Breeze Perfume, a fragrance that is inspired by the enchanting sands of the UAE. The scent is crafted with notes of jasmine and oud, and it is designed to evoke the essence of a serene desert evening. The bottle is elegantly designed, and it is made to capture the beauty of the Arabian landscape. This perfume is loved by those who appreciate luxury and sophistication, and it is recommended for both day and night wear.