This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Tweet in English.
Overuse of passive voice
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Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed corrections to remove instances of passive voice."
The new mall opened yesterday in Dubai, drawing a large crowd to the grand opening. The atmosphere buzzed with excitement, and attendees shared countless photos on social media. Organisers hope the mall becomes a popular destination for both locals and tourists.
The new mall was opened yesterday in Dubai, and many people were invited to the grand opening. A lot of excitement was felt by everyone who attended, and many photos were shared on social media. It is hoped that the mall will become a popular destination for both locals and tourists.
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
I just got anew phone, and I am so excited to use it. WThe weather in Dubai is amazing today, perfect for awalk on thebeach. CI can't wait to meetmy friends later and enjoy thesunset together!
Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA
"Don't forget to use articles and possessives! : )"
I just got a new phone, and I am so excited to use it. The weather in Dubai is amazing today, perfect for a walk on the beach. I can't wait to meet my friends later and enjoy the sunset together!
I just got new phone and I am so excited to use it. Weather in Dubai is amazing today, perfect for walk on beach. Can't wait to meet friends later and enjoy sunset together!