Common English Mistakes in Official Statements by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Official Statement in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

In response to recent environmental concerns,it is crucial to address the air quality issues affecting our cities. GThe government has implemented new regulations to reduce emissions from vehicles and factories. It is our responsibility to ensure a healthier environment for future generations.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to replace missing sentence subjects."

In response to recent environmental concerns, it is crucial to address the air quality issues affecting our cities. The government has implemented new regulations to reduce emissions from vehicles and factories. It is our responsibility to ensure a healthier environment for future generations.

In response to recent environmental concerns, is crucial to address the air quality issues affecting our cities. Government has implemented new regulations to reduce emissions from vehicles and factories. Is our responsibility to ensure a healthier environment for future generations.

Mistake Example #2

Using overly formal or direct language

To wWhom iIt mMay cConcern, it isWe with utmost seriousnld likess that weo announce the implementation ofan important new policy regarding public transportation. The government has decided to enforce strict regulations to ensure safety and efficiencyfor all citizens. We urge everyone to comply with these directives immediately to avoid any inconvenience or penalty.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to reduce use of overly formal language."

To Whom It May Concern, We would like to announce the implementation of an important new policy regarding public transportation. The government has decided to enforce strict regulations to ensure safety and efficiency. We urge everyone to comply to avoid any inconvenience or penalty.

To whom it may concern, it is with utmost seriousness that we announce the implementation of new policy regarding public transportation. The government has decided to enforce strict regulations to ensure safety and efficiency for all citizens. We urge everyone to comply with these directives immediately to avoid any inconvenience or penalty.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

To wWhom iIt mMay cConcern, tThe government of Taiwan is announcing that there ismany new policiesbeing implemented to improve public transportation. TWehavereceived are muchlot of feedback from citizens, and we are committed to addressing all concerns. We appreciate the support of our community and look forward to continueing to working together for a better future.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking for proper usage of singular vs. plural noun, among other fixes."

To Whom It May Concern, The government of Taiwan is announcing many new policies to improve public transportation. We have received a lot of feedback from citizens and we are committed to addressing all concerns. We appreciate the support of our community and look forward to continuing to work together for a better future.

To whom it may concern, the government of Taiwan is announcing that there is many new policies being implemented to improve public transportation. There are much feedback from citizens, and we are committed to address all concerns. We appreciate the support of our community and look forward to continue working together for a better future.