This page focuses on errors typically made by native Spanish speakers from Mexico when writing in English.
| Category: | Student Personal writing used for admissions and transfer letters. |
| Common Users: | Students of various disciplines. |
Student / Admission Essay
Misuse of prepositions ('Married with' instead of 'Married to')
I am very excited to apply for the Master's program in Environmental Science at your esteemed university. SEver since I was a child, I have been fascinated with the natural world and how we can protect it. I am married with mypassionate faborut sustainability and believe thatyour program will provide me withthe knowledge and skillsI need to make a significant impact in this field.
Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some corrections for improper prepositional phrasing."
I am very excited to apply for the Master's program in Environmental Science at your esteemed university. Ever since I was a child, I have been fascinated with the natural world and how we can protect it. I am passionate about sustainability and believe your program will provide the knowledge and skills I need to make a significant impact in this field.
I am very excited to apply for the Master's program in Environmental Science at your esteemed university. Since I was a child, I have been fascinated with the natural world and how we can protect it. I am married with my passion for sustainability and believe that your program will provide me with the knowledge and skills to make a significant impact in this field.
Student / Personal Statement
Misuse of prepositions ('Married with' instead of 'Married to')
I am excited to apply ftor the Master's program in Environmental Science at your esteemed university. Growing up in Mexico, I have always been fascinated with nature and its preservation. I am comarrmitted witho my passion for environmental conservation, and I believe this program will help me achieve my career goals.
Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some prepositions, plus a few other words, to make the English sound correct and natural."
I am excited to apply to the Master's program in Environmental Science at your esteemed university. Growing up in Mexico, I have always been fascinated with nature and its preservation. I am committed to my passion for environmental conservation, and I believe this program will help me achieve my career goals.
I am excited to apply for the Master's program in Environmental Science at your esteemed university. Growing up in Mexico, I have always been fascinated with nature and its preservation. I am married with my passion for environmental conservation, and I believe this program will help me achieve my career goals.
Student / Transfer Essay
Overuse of present continuous ('I am going to the school every day' instead of 'I go to school every day')
I am writing this transfer essay because I amwanting to join your university. I am studying engineering at my current school, and I amhopinge to continue my studies with you. I ambelievinge that your program isofferings the best opportunities for my future career.
Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some corrections for verb tense issues."
I am writing this transfer essay because I want to join your university. I am studying engineering at my current school, and I hope to continue my studies with you. I believe that your program offers the best opportunities for my future career.
I am writing this transfer essay because I am wanting to join your university. I am studying engineering at my current school, and I am hoping to continue my studies with you. I am believing that your program is offering the best opportunities for my future career.