Common English Mistakes in Press Releases by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Press Release in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using overly formal or direct language

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Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to reduce overly formal language."

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: We are pleased to announce the grand opening of our new Taipei branch on November 15. We invite all esteemed guests to attend this important event demonstrating our commitment to excellence and innovation. Your presence will be greatly appreciated and we look forward to seeing you there!

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: We are pleased to announce the grand opening of our new Taipei branch, which will occur on 15th November. It is our honor to invite all esteemed guests to attend this significant event, where we will demonstrate our commitment to excellence and innovation. Your presence will be greatly appreciated, and we look forward to welcoming you with utmost sincerity.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: Taipei, Taiwan – The annual Taipei Lantern Festival is set to begin next week, and there is mucha great deal of excitement among the local community. There are many beautiful lanterns on display, and a large numuchber of people are expected to attend the event. The festival organizers have prepared various activities for visitors, ensuring that there is something for everyone to enjoy.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some corrections for singular/plural nouns, among other fixes."

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: Taipei, Taiwan – The annual Taipei Lantern Festival is set to begin next week, and there is a great deal of excitement among the local community. There are many beautiful lanterns on display, and a large number of people are expected to attend the event. The festival organizers have prepared various activities for visitors, ensuring that there is something for everyone to enjoy.

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: Taipei, Taiwan – The annual Taipei Lantern Festival is set to begin next week, and there is much excitement among the local community. There are many beautiful lanterns on display, and much people are expected to attend the event. The festival organizers have prepared various activities for visitors, ensuring that there is something for everyone to enjoy.

Mistake Example #3

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

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Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to replace missing sentence subjects, among other fixes."

Taipei, October 15, 2023 – Exciting news for technology enthusiasts. The launch of a new smartphone model will take place next week. It is designed to offer users enhanced features and improved performance. The event will be held at the Taipei International Convention Center, and everyone is welcome to come.

Taipei, October 15, 2023 – Exciting news for technology enthusiasts. Launch of new smartphone model will take place next week. Is designed to offer users enhanced features and improved performance. Event will be held at Taipei International Convention Center, and everyone is welcome to join.