This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing in English.
Academic Writing / Academic Journal Article
Overuse of passive voice
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change are being felt more intensely in the Middle East region. The dData wasere collected from various sources, andit was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is believed that tThe increase in temperature isbelieved to be causing significant impacts on agriculture and water resources. The findings were published in theJournal of Environmental Studiespublished the findings, and ithe iauthors hoped that further research will be conducted to explore mitigation strategies.
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Vince, United States
"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability. Nicely done :)"
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change are being felt more intensely in the Middle East region. Data were collected from various sources and analyzed using advanced statistical methods. The increase in temperature is believed to be causing significant impacts on agriculture and water resources. The Journal of Environmental Studies published the findings, and the authors hope that further research will be conducted to explore mitigation strategies.
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change are being felt more intensely in the Middle East region. The data was collected from various sources, and it was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is believed that the increase in temperature is causing significant impacts on agriculture and water resources. The findings were published in the Journal of Environmental Studies, and it is hoped that further research will be conducted to explore mitigation strategies.
Business Writing / Annual Report
Overuse of passive voice
In the year 2022,the company recorded significant achievements. wereIt relauncordhed bythe company. The new product line was launchedsuccessfully, and observed a 20% increase in saleswas observed. The customer satisfaction rate wasimproved, and the company received several awardswere received by the company for excellence in service. The company met itsstrategic goals were met,and anchieved a strong financial performancewas achieved, whichwas appreciated by the stakeholdersappreciated.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to remove passive voice."
In the year 2022, the company recorded significant achievements. It launched the new product line successfully, and observed a 20% increase in sales. The customer satisfaction rate improved, and the company received several awards for excellence in service. The company met its strategic goals and achieved a strong financial performance, which the stakeholders appreciated.
In the year 2022, significant achievements were recorded by the company. The new product line was launched successfully, and a 20% increase in sales was observed. The customer satisfaction rate was improved, and several awards were received by the company for excellence in service. The strategic goals were met, and a strong financial performance was achieved, which was appreciated by the stakeholders.
Educational & Instructional Writing / E-learning Module
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
Welcome tothe module on effective communication skills. In this lesson, we will learn how to give apresentation. First, you need to prepare thecontent carefully. Make sure you havea clear structure for your talk. Start with theintroduction, then move tothe main points, and finish with theconclusion. Practice isthe key to success, so rehearse your speech multiple times. Remember, confidence is important when you stand in front of an audience.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to add missing articles ("the," "an," etc.)."
Welcome to the module on effective communication skills. In this lesson, we will learn how to give a presentation. First, you need to prepare the content carefully. Make sure you have a clear structure for your talk. Start with the introduction, then move to the main points, and finish with the conclusion. Practice is the key to success, so rehearse your speech multiple times. Remember, confidence is important when you stand in front of an audience.
Welcome to module on effective communication skills. In this lesson, we will learn how to give presentation. First, you need to prepare content carefully. Make sure you have clear structure for your talk. Start with introduction, then move to main points, and finish with conclusion. Practice is key to success, so rehearse your speech multiple times. Remember, confidence is important when you stand in front of audience.
ESL Writing / Email Practice
Overuse of passive voice
Subject: Request for Meeting Dear Mr. Ahmed, It isam hopeding that the meeting can be scheduled for next week. TWe discussed the project details were discussed,andit was agreed that further clarification is needed. Your feedback is appreciated, and itwe isare requesteding that you suggest a suitable timeis suggested by you. Best regards, Fatima
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the passive voice phrases to the active voice to improve readability. Good work!"
Subject: Request for Meeting Dear Mr. Ahmed, I am hoping that the meeting can be scheduled for next week. We discussed the project details and agreed that further clarification is needed. Your feedback is appreciated, and we are requesting that you suggest a suitable time. Best regards, Fatima
Subject: Request for Meeting Dear Mr. Ahmed, It is hoped that the meeting can be scheduled for next week. The project details were discussed, and it was agreed that further clarification is needed. Your feedback is appreciated, and it is requested that a suitable time is suggested by you. Best regards, Fatima
Fiction & Creative Writing / Creative Nonfiction
Overuse of passive voice
In the golden sands of the desert, a story was told bythe windtold a story. The ancient city was built by the hands of skilled artisansbuilt the ancient city, andits beauty was admired by travelers from distant landsadmired its beauty. TGeneration after generation passed down the tales of the citywere passed down through generations, andits secrets were whispered by the stars in the night skywhispered its secrets.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to reduce the use of passive voice."
In the golden sands of the desert, the wind told a story. The hands of skilled artisans built the ancient city, and travelers from distant lands admired its beauty. Generation after generation passed down the tales of the city, and the stars in the night sky whispered its secrets.
In the golden sands of the desert, a story was told by the wind. The ancient city was built by the hands of skilled artisans, and its beauty was admired by travelers from distant lands. The tales of the city were passed down through generations, and its secrets were whispered by the stars in the night sky.
Government & Policy Writing / Government Memo
Overuse of passive voice
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy Procedures ItWe haswill bimplemendecided that the new policy procedures will be implementedstarting next month. The committee reviewed theguidelines were reviewed by the committee,and witll was aginforeed thatm all departmentheadswill be informed about the changes. ITo ensure compliance, each department imust makexpected that the necessary adjustments. We will be made by each department to ensurecomplianlece. Thet feedback fromthe department heads will be collected,andaddress any concernswill be addressed in the upcoming meeting.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to reduce the use of passive voice, among other fixes."
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy Procedures We will implement the new policy procedures starting next month. The committee reviewed the guidelines and will inform all department heads about the changes. To ensure compliance, each department must make the necessary adjustments. We will collect feedback from the department heads and address any concerns in the upcoming meeting.
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy Procedures It has been decided that the new policy procedures will be implemented starting next month. The guidelines were reviewed by the committee, and it was agreed that all departments will be informed about the changes. It is expected that the necessary adjustments will be made by each department to ensure compliance. The feedback from department heads will be collected, and any concerns will be addressed in the upcoming meeting.
Healthcare & Medical Writing / Clinical Study
Overuse of passive voice
TWe conducted the clinical studywas conducted to evaluate the effects of the new medication on patients with chronic migraines. ThWedata was collecteddata from various hospitals across the United Arab Emirates, and analyzedthe resultswere analyzed to determine the efficacy of the treatment. It wasWe found reporthats of significant improvementwas observed in the majority of patients, and minimalside effectswere reported to be minimal.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to reduce the use of passive voice."
We conducted the clinical study to evaluate the effects of the new medication on patients with chronic migraines. We collected data from various hospitals across the United Arab Emirates, and analyzed the results to determine the efficacy of the treatment. We found reports of significant improvement in the majority of patients, and minimal side effects.
The clinical study was conducted to evaluate the effects of the new medication on patients with chronic migraines. The data was collected from various hospitals across the United Arab Emirates, and the results were analyzed to determine the efficacy of the treatment. It was found that significant improvement was observed in the majority of patients, and side effects were reported to be minimal.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio
Overuse of passive voice
In my career portfolio, it isI highlighted thatmy extensive experience in project management, which I hasve gained over the past five years. NI completed numerous successful projects were completed, anddeveloped my leadership skillswere developed through various challenging situations. It is believeI have consistently demonstrated thatmy strong communication abilities and a strategic mindsetwere demonstrated consistently, which contributed to the achievement of myteam's goals.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the passive voice constructions to the active voice. This should improve the flow of the text."
In my career portfolio, I highlighted my extensive experience in project management, which I have gained over the past five years. I completed numerous successful project and developed my leadership skills through various challenging situations. I believe I have consistently demonstrated my strong communication abilities and a strategic mindset, which contributed to the achievement of my team's goals.
In my career portfolio, it is highlighted that extensive experience in project management was gained over the past five years. Numerous successful projects were completed, and leadership skills were developed through various challenging situations. It is believed that strong communication abilities and a strategic mindset were demonstrated consistently, which contributed to the achievement of team goals.
Journalism & Media / Editorial
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
In recent years, climate change has become anurgent issue inthe United Arab Emirates. As temperatures rise and rainfall patterns shift, we must take action to protect ourenvironment. GThe government has introduced new policies to reduce carbon emissions, but it isthe responsibility of every citizen to contribute. By adopting sustainable practices, we can ensure abetter future for our children.
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Vince, United States
"This was already very well-written – I just made a few minor changes to fill in missing articles :)"
In recent years, climate change has become an urgent issue in the United Arab Emirates. As temperatures rise and rainfall patterns shift, we must take action to protect our environment. The government has introduced new policies to reduce carbon emissions, but it is the responsibility of every citizen to contribute. By adopting sustainable practices, we can ensure a better future for our children.
In recent years, climate change has become urgent issue in United Arab Emirates. As temperatures rise and rainfall patterns shift, we must take action to protect environment. Government has introduced new policies to reduce carbon emissions, but it is responsibility of every citizen to contribute. By adopting sustainable practices, we can ensure better future for our children.
Legal & Formal Writing / Agreement
Overuse of passive voice
This agreement binds madebetweenothe parties, and it iswho agreed that the terms will beo followits ted by both siderms. The payment is to be received by the first partywill receive payment, andthe services are to be provided by the second partywill provide the services. AIf any disputes are to be resolved by arbitration, and the decision is to beaccepted by, both partieswill resolve them through arbitration and accept the final decision.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This was revised to remove instances of passive voice."
This agreement binds both parties, who agree to follow its terms. The first party will receive payment, and the second party will provide the services. If any disputes arise, both parties will resolve them through arbitration and accept the final decision.
This agreement is made between the parties, and it is agreed that the terms will be followed by both sides. The payment is to be received by the first party, and the services are to be provided by the second party. Any disputes are to be resolved by arbitration, and the decision is to be accepted by both parties.
Marketing & Advertising Writing / Ad Copy
Overuse of passive voice
Discover the luxury that isoffered by our new beachfront resort in Dubai. Every detail haisbeen designed to ensure that your stay is rememberedyour stay as a unique experience. TWe provide the finest amenities are provided, andour exceptional service is guaranteed to make your vacation unforgettable.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"I made changes mainly to cut down on the use of passive voice."
Discover the luxury of our new beachfront resort in Dubai. Every detail is designed to ensure that you remember your stay as a unique experience. We provide the finest amenities and our exceptional service is guaranteed to make your vacation unforgettable.
Discover the luxury that is offered by our new beachfront resort in Dubai. Every detail has been designed to ensure that your stay is remembered as a unique experience. The finest amenities are provided, and exceptional service is guaranteed to make your vacation unforgettable.
Personal & Lifestyle Writing / Journal Entry
Overuse of passive voice
Today,I took a walk was taken by me along the Corniche, and it wasI enjoyedit very much. The weather was perfect, and many people were seenenjoying the beach. Later, my mother cookeda delicious meal, wahichscooked by my mother, and it was shared with the family. The eveningwas ended with a beautiful sunset, which wase watched from the balcony.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed most of the passive voice constructions to the active voice to improve readability."
Today, I took a walk along the Corniche, and I enjoyed it very much. The weather was perfect, and many people were enjoying the beach. Later, my mother cooked a delicious meal, which she shared with the family. The evening ended with a beautiful sunset, which we watched from the balcony.
Today, a walk was taken by me along the Corniche, and it was enjoyed very much. The weather was perfect, and many people were seen enjoying the beach. Later, a delicious meal was cooked by my mother, and it was shared with the family. The evening was ended with a beautiful sunset, which was watched from the balcony.
Social Media & Online Writing / Blog Post
Overuse of passive voice
In the vibrant city of Dubai, a new café wasopened last week, and it is being loved byeveryoneis loving it. TMany visitors appreciate the unique design and the delicious menuare being appreciated by many visitors. The café is located in a busy area, and it ishoped thatfully it will become a popular spot for both locals and tourists.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the passive voice constructions to the active voice and made a few stylistic tweaks. Nice work!"
In the vibrant city of Dubai, a new café opened last week, and everyone is loving it. Many visitors appreciate the unique design and the delicious menu. The café is located in a busy area, and hopefully it will become a popular spot for both locals and tourists.
In the vibrant city of Dubai, a new café was opened last week, and it is being loved by everyone. The unique design and the delicious menu are being appreciated by many visitors. The café is located in a busy area, and it is hoped that it will become a popular spot for both locals and tourists.
Student / Admission Essay
Overuse of passive voice
As a student who has always been fascinated by the world of engineering, it wasI decidedby me to pursue a degree in mechanical engineering at your esteemed university. The challenges faced byengineersface in the UAE are seen as opportunities for innovation and growth, and it isI believed by me that your program will provide the skills needed to contribute to this field.
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Vince, United States
"Your ideas were clear :) I just made a few small changes to reduce the use of passive voice."
As a student who has always been fascinated by the world of engineering, I decided to pursue a degree in mechanical engineering at your esteemed university. The challenges engineers face in the UAE are seen as opportunities for innovation and growth, and I believe that your program will provide the skills needed to contribute to this field.
As a student who has always been fascinated by the world of engineering, it was decided by me to pursue a degree in mechanical engineering at your esteemed university. The challenges faced by engineers in the UAE are seen as opportunities for innovation and growth, and it is believed by me that your program will provide the skills needed to contribute to this field.
Technical & Scientific Writing / Engineering Specification
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
The device is designed to operate under specific conditions outlined in thespecification. It is important to ensure thatthe component is installed correctly to avoid malfunction. UThe user must followthe procedure carefully to maintain theefficiency and safety of thesystem.
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Vince, United States
"Just a few small changes were needed to correct articles. Nice job! "
The device is designed to operate under specific conditions outlined in the specification. It is important to ensure that the component is installed correctly to avoid malfunction. The user must follow the procedure carefully to maintain the efficiency and safety of the system.
The device is designed to operate under specific conditions outlined in specification. It is important to ensure that component is installed correctly to avoid malfunction. User must follow procedure carefully to maintain efficiency and safety of system.