This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing in English.
Academic Writing / Academic Journal Article
Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')
In theesteemed journal of environmental studies, Iam honored to present the findings of our research on the impact of climate change on desert ecosystems. It is with great privilege that Io inform you that our study, conducted withutmost diligence, reveals significant alterations in the biodiversity of the region. I am deeplygratified to share these insights, which I believe will greatlycontributeprofoundly to the academic discourse on environmental conservation.
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Vince, United States
"This was very good! Just a few small changes were made to reduce the use of overly formal English. "
In the journal of environmental studies, I present the findings of our research on the impact of climate change on desert ecosystems. It is a privilege to inform you that our study, conducted with diligence, reveals significant alterations in the biodiversity of the region. I am gratified to share these insights, which I believe will greatly contribute to the academic discourse on environmental conservation.
In the esteemed journal of environmental studies, I am honored to present the findings of our research on the impact of climate change on desert ecosystems. It is with great privilege that I inform you that our study, conducted with utmost diligence, reveals significant alterations in the biodiversity of the region. I am deeply gratified to share these insights, which I believe will contribute profoundly to the academic discourse on environmental conservation.
Business Writing / Annual Report
Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns
In the past year, our company has achieved significant growth in hermarket share, andhe has expanded operations into new regions. TheOur team has worked diligently to meet herits targets, and hwe isare proud of theour accomplishmentswe have made together. Looking ahead, we are confident that our strategies will continue to drive success and help herus achieve our goals for the upcoming year.
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I corrected the usage, gender, and quantity of some of the pronouns. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."
In the past year, our company has achieved significant growth in market share and has expanded operations into new regions. Our team has worked diligently to meet its targets, and we are proud of our accomplishments. Looking ahead, we are confident that our strategies will continue to drive success and help us achieve our goals for the upcoming year.
In the past year, our company has achieved significant growth in her market share, and he has expanded operations into new regions. The team has worked diligently to meet her targets, and he is proud of the accomplishments we have made together. Looking ahead, we are confident that our strategies will continue to drive success and help her achieve our goals for the upcoming year.
Educational & Instructional Writing / E-learning Module
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
Welcome to the E-learning Module on English Grammar Basics. Today, we discuss how to use past tense in sentences. Yesterday, Ahmed visited his grandmother and she cooked a delicious dinner for him. They enjoyed the meal and talked about many things. Remember, usingthe correct verb tense helpins makinge your sentences clear and accurate.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"Very good! Just a couple of changes to make verb tense consistent."
Welcome to the E-learning Module on English Grammar Basics. Today, we discuss how to use past tense in sentences. Yesterday, Ahmed visited his grandmother and she cooked a delicious dinner for him. They enjoyed the meal and talked about many things. Remember, using the correct verb tense helps make your sentences clear and accurate.
Welcome to the E-learning Module on English Grammar Basics. Today, we discuss how to use past tense in sentences. Yesterday, Ahmed visit his grandmother and she cook delicious dinner for him. They enjoy the meal and talk about many things. Remember, using correct verb tense help in making your sentences clear and accurate.
ESL Writing / Email Practice
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
Subject: Request for Meeting Dear Mr. Ahmed,I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I attended the conference last week, andwhere I learned many new strategies. I suggest we meet next Tuesday to discuss how wewill implement these ideas in our project. Please let me know if this time works for you. Thank you for your consideration.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I corrected some problems with the verb tense and polished up the text. Good work!"
Subject: Request for Meeting Dear Mr. Ahmed, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I attended the conference last week, where I learned many new strategies. I suggest we meet next Tuesday to discuss how we will implement these ideas in our project. Please let me know if this time works for you. Thank you for your consideration.
Subject: Request for Meeting Dear Mr. Ahmed, I hope this email find you well. I am writing to inform you that I attend the conference last week, and I learn many new strategies. I suggest we meet next Tuesday to discuss how we implement these ideas in our project. Please let me know if this time work for you. Thank you for your consideration.
Fiction & Creative Writing / Creative Nonfiction
Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')
I amwishonored to share with you the story of my first journey to the desert, where the sands stretch endlessly and the sun bestows its golden light upon the earth. Itis with grakeat pleasure that Iin recounting the moment when I first rode a camel, an experience that filled my heart with profoundjoy and gratitude. As I reflect upon this adventure, I amdeeply humbled by the beauty of nature and the hospitality of the people who welcomed me with open arms.
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Vince, United States
"This was already very well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make it sound a bit more natural :)"
I wish to share with you the story of my first journey to the desert, where the sands stretch endlessly and the sun bestows its golden light upon the earth. I take pleasure in recounting the moment when I first rode a camel, an experience that filled my heart with joy and gratitude. As I reflect on this adventure, I am humbled by the beauty of nature and the hospitality of the people who welcomed me with open arms.
I am honored to share with you the story of my first journey to the desert, where the sands stretch endlessly and the sun bestows its golden light upon the earth. It is with great pleasure that I recount the moment when I first rode a camel, an experience that filled my heart with profound joy and gratitude. As I reflect upon this adventure, I am deeply humbled by the beauty of nature and the hospitality of the people who welcomed me with open arms.
Government & Policy Writing / Government Memo
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy We implement new policy sStarting next month, we will implement a new policy to improve efficiency in all departments. Each department willsubmit their report bythe end of this week to ensure compliance withthe new guidelines. It is important that everyone understand the changes and apply them correctly in their daily operations.
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Camille, Maryland, USA
"Looks very good overall. Watch out for proper use of verb tenses. "
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy Starting next month, we will implement a new policy to improve efficiency in all departments. Each department will submit their report by the end of this week to ensure compliance with the new guidelines. It is important that everyone understand the changes and apply them correctly in their daily operations.
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy We implement new policy starting next month to improve efficiency in all departments. Each department submit their report by end of this week to ensure compliance with new guidelines. It is important that everyone understand the changes and apply them correctly in their daily operations.
Healthcare & Medical Writing / Clinical Study
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
The clinical study aims to evaluate the effectiveness of the new medication on patients withchronic asthmapatients. Participants are recruited from various hospitals in Riyadh, and they undergo treatment for a period of six months. The study fresultsindicate that the medication significantly improves lung function in amajority of thepatients.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some verb tense corrections."
The clinical study aims to evaluate the effectiveness of the new medication on chronic asthma patients. Participants are recruited from various hospitals in Riyadh, and they undergo treatment for a period of six months. The study results indicate that the medication significantly improves lung function in a majority of patients.
The clinical study aim to evaluate the effectiveness of the new medication on patients with chronic asthma. Participants are recruited from various hospitals in Riyadh, and they undergo treatment for a period of six months. The study find that the medication significantly improve lung function in majority of the patients.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio
Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')
I amwishonored to present my career portfolio to you, showcasing my esteemedachievements and professional journey. It is with greatm pleasured thaotI informell you of my extensive experience in the field of engineering, where I have had the privilegchance to work on numerous presthigioush-level projects. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to share my skills and accomplishments, and I am eager to contribute my expertise to your esteemedorganization.
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Vince, United States
"Nice job! I just made a few small changes to improve the flow and reduce the number of formal expressions. "
I wish to present my career portfolio to you, showcasing my achievements and professional journey. I am pleased to tell you of my extensive experience in the field of engineering, where I have had the chance to work on numerous high-level projects. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to share my skills and accomplishments, and I am eager to contribute my expertise to your organization.
I am honored to present my career portfolio to you, showcasing my esteemed achievements and professional journey. It is with great pleasure that I inform you of my extensive experience in the field of engineering, where I have had the privilege to work on numerous prestigious projects. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to share my skills and accomplishments, and I am eager to contribute my expertise to your esteemed organization.
Journalism & Media / Editorial
Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')
It aismy honored to inform you that the recent developments in our beloved city of Riyadh have been nothing short of remarkable. It is with greatm pleasured that Io announce the opening of the new cultural center, which I am cshonfiuldent will greatly enrich the lives of our esteemedcitizens. I am deeply privileged to share tThis newswith you, as it marks a significant milestone in our ongoing journey towards cultural excellence.
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I changed some of the phrasing to sound more straightforward while still maintaining a professional tone to the sentences."
It is my honor to inform you that the recent developments in our beloved city of Riyadh have been nothing short of remarkable. I am pleased to announce the opening of the new cultural center, which should greatly enrich the lives of our citizens. This news marks a significant milestone in our ongoing journey toward cultural excellence.
I am honored to inform you that the recent developments in our beloved city of Riyadh have been nothing short of remarkable. It is with great pleasure that I announce the opening of the new cultural center, which I am confident will greatly enrich the lives of our esteemed citizens. I am deeply privileged to share this news with you, as it marks a significant milestone in our ongoing journey towards cultural excellence.
Legal & Formal Writing / Agreement
Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')
I am honored to inform you that we have reached an agreement regarding the terms of our partnership, and it is with great pleasure thatI express my sincere gratitude for your esteemedcooperation in this matter. It is mydistinguished privilege to confirm that all parties involved have graciously accepted the conditions outlined, and I am deeplyhumbled to convey my appreciation for your esteemedunderstanding and support.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Good work! I took out some of the overly formal expressions while retaining the professional tone of this text."
I am honored to inform you that we have reached an agreement regarding the terms of our partnership, and I express my sincere gratitude for your cooperation in this matter. It is my privilege to confirm that all parties involved have graciously accepted the conditions outlined, and I am humbled to convey my appreciation for your understanding and support.
I am honored to inform you that we have reached an agreement regarding the terms of our partnership, and it is with great pleasure that I express my sincere gratitude for your esteemed cooperation in this matter. It is my distinguished privilege to confirm that all parties involved have graciously accepted the conditions outlined, and I am deeply humbled to convey my appreciation for your esteemed understanding and support.
Marketing & Advertising Writing / Ad Copy
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
DStepiscntover the magic of our new perfume, w—eachere every scenttake you on a journey through the romance and mystery ofArabian nights. YWith every spray, you'll feel thwrapped in elegance and luxurywith every spray. Don'’t miss this exclusive offer,—it cjust might trangesform the way you experience fragrance forever.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some adjustments for readability and flow."
Step into the magic of our new perfume—each scent a journey through the romance and mystery of Arabian nights. With every spray, you'll feel wrapped in elegance and luxury. Don’t miss this exclusive offer—it just might transform the way you experience fragrance forever.
Discover the magic of our new perfume, where every scent take you on a journey through Arabian nights. You feel the elegance and luxury with every spray. Don't miss this exclusive offer, it change the way you experience fragrance forever.
Personal & Lifestyle Writing / Journal Entry
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
Today I waoke up early and decided to go for a walk in the park. The weather iwas nice, and I enjoyed the fresh air. After that, I meet my friend Ahmed, and we talked about our plans for the weekend. We agreed that wewill visit the new restaurant in town tomorrow.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Nice work! I just corrected a few problems with the verb tense."
Today I woke up early and decided to go for a walk in the park. The weather was nice, and I enjoyed the fresh air. After that, I met my friend Ahmed, and we talked about our plans for the weekend. We agreed that we will visit the new restaurant in town tomorrow.
Today I wake up early and decide to go for a walk in the park. The weather is nice, and I enjoy the fresh air. After that, I meet my friend Ahmed, and we talk about our plans for the weekend. We agree that we visit the new restaurant in town tomorrow.
Social Media & Online Writing / Blog Post
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
I'm starting my blog today to share my journey in learning English. I always love to write about my experiences and how I improve my skills. Last week, I visited a new language center in Riyadh, and it helped me a lot. Every day, I practice speaking with my friends, and we enjoy tolearning together.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"Just a few small changes were needed. However, be mindful of your use of verb tenses. For example, "I start my blog today" should be "I'm starting my blog today" and "Last week, I visit" should be "Last week, I visited"."
I'm starting my blog today to share my journey in learning English. I always love to write about my experiences and how I improve my skills. Last week, I visited a new language center in Riyadh, and it helped me a lot. Every day, I practice speaking with my friends, and we enjoy learning together.
I start my blog today to share my journey in learning English. I always love to write about my experiences and how I improve my skills. Last week, I visit a new language center in Riyadh, and it help me a lot. Every day, I practice speaking with my friends, and we enjoy to learn together.
Student / Admission Essay
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
As a young student from Saudi Arabia, I havealways dreamed tof studying at your prestigious university. Since I wams a child, I havehad a strong passion for engineering and technology. I believe that studying inat your institution will help me achieve my goals and contribute to the development of my country.
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Vince, United States
"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability. Nicely done :)"
As a young student from Saudi Arabia, I have always dreamed of studying at your prestigious university. Since I was a child, I have had a strong passion for engineering and technology. I believe that studying at your institution will help me achieve my goals and contribute to the development of my country.
As a young student from Saudi Arabia, I always dream to study at your prestigious university. Since I am a child, I have a strong passion for engineering and technology. I believe that studying in your institution will help me achieve my goals and contribute to the development of my country.
Technical & Scientific Writing / Engineering Specification
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
The hydraulic system design specifyies that the pump operates at a pressure of 2000 psi. The system includes a reservoir thatcan hold 50 liters of hydraulic fluid. It is important that the components isbe assembled according to the diagram to ensure proper function.
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Vince, United States
"Overall your writing was very professional; it just needed a few tweaks to make things consistent. Good job! "
The hydraulic system design specifies that the pump operates at a pressure of 2000 psi. The system includes a reservoir that can hold 50 liters of hydraulic fluid. It is important that the components be assembled according to the diagram to ensure proper function.
The hydraulic system design specify that the pump operate at a pressure of 2000 psi. The system include a reservoir that hold 50 liters of hydraulic fluid. It is important that the components is assembled according to the diagram to ensure proper function.