Common English Mistakes in Privacy Policies by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Privacy Policy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

This Privacy Policy explains how we collect and useyour personal information when you visit our website. We are committed to protecting your privacy andwe ensure that your data is secure. If you have any questions about this policy, please contact us and we will respond as soon as possible.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"It needed a few verb tense changes, but otherwise it sounds good."

This Privacy Policy explains how we collect and use your personal information when you visit our website. We are committed to protecting your privacy and we ensure that your data is secure. If you have any questions about this policy, please contact us and we will respond as soon as possible.

This Privacy Policy explain how we collect and use personal information when you visit our website. We are committed to protect your privacy and ensure that your data is secure. If you have any questions about this policy, please contact us and we will respond as soon as possible.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

We arewishonored to inform you that your privacy is of theutmost importance to us, and weare privileged to assure you that we take all necessary measures to protect your personal information. It is with greatrespect that we notify you that by using our services, you consent to the collection and use of your data in accordance with this policy. We are delighted to inform you that aAny changes to this policy will be communicated to you with the highestregard for your understanding and convenience.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was already very well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make it sound a bit more natural :)"

We wish to inform you that your privacy is of the utmost importance to us, and we assure you that we take all necessary measures to protect your personal information. It is with respect that we notify you that by using our services you consent to the collection and use of your data in accordance with this policy. Any changes to this policy will be communicated to you with regard for your understanding and convenience.

We are honored to inform you that your privacy is of utmost importance to us, and we are privileged to assure you that we take all necessary measures to protect your personal information. It is with great respect that we notify you that by using our services, you consent to the collection and use of your data in accordance with this policy. We are delighted to inform you that any changes to this policy will be communicated to you with the highest regard for your understanding and convenience.

Mistake Example #3

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

This Privacy Policy explains how we collect, use, and share the personal information of our users. When a user visits our website, he or shemay providehis or her personal data, such as name and email address, to access certain features. We ensure that this information is protected and will not be shared with third parties without theuser's consent.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Great job! Very few changes were needed overall."

This Privacy Policy explains how we collect, use, and share the personal information of our users. When a user visits our website, he or she may provide his or her personal data, such as name and email address, to access certain features. We ensure that this information is protected and will not be shared with third parties without the user's consent.

This Privacy Policy explains how we collect, use, and share personal information of our users. When a user visits our website, he may provide her personal data, such as name and email address, to access certain features. We ensure that his information is protected and will not be shared with third parties without her consent.