This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing in English.
| Category: | Academic Writing Writing used in educational and research settings. |
| Common Users: | Students, Researchers, Professors. |
Academic Writing / Academic Journal Article
Overuse of passive voice
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change are being felt more intensely in the Middle East region. The dData wasere collected from various sources, andit was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is believed that tThe increase in temperature isbelieved to be causing significant impacts on agriculture and water resources. The findings were published in theJournal of Environmental Studiespublished the findings, and ithe iauthors hoped that further research will be conducted to explore mitigation strategies.
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Vince, United States
"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability. Nicely done :)"
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change are being felt more intensely in the Middle East region. Data were collected from various sources and analyzed using advanced statistical methods. The increase in temperature is believed to be causing significant impacts on agriculture and water resources. The Journal of Environmental Studies published the findings, and the authors hope that further research will be conducted to explore mitigation strategies.
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change are being felt more intensely in the Middle East region. The data was collected from various sources, and it was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is believed that the increase in temperature is causing significant impacts on agriculture and water resources. The findings were published in the Journal of Environmental Studies, and it is hoped that further research will be conducted to explore mitigation strategies.
Academic Writing / Book Review
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
I recently readthe book "The Kite Runner" by Khaled Hosseini, and it was truly amoving story. The author capturesthe essence of friendship and betrayal in way that is both powerful and emotional. I recommend this book to anyone who is interested in exploring deep human emotions and complex relationships.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some corrections for proper use of articles, among other tweaks."
I recently read the book "The Kite Runner" by Khaled Hosseini, and it was truly a moving story. The author captures the essence of friendship and betrayal in way that is both powerful and emotional. I recommend this book to anyone who is interested in exploring deep human emotions and complex relationships.
I recently read book "The Kite Runner" by Khaled Hosseini, and it was truly moving story. The author captures essence of friendship and betrayal in way that is both powerful and emotional. I recommend this book to anyone who is interested in exploring deep human emotions and complex relationships.
Academic Writing / Conference Paper
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
Ina recent study conducted at theuniversity, we exploredthe impact of climate change on marine ecosystems in theArabian Gulf. Our findings indicate that arise in sea temperature hasmade a significant effect on coral reefs, which are crucial for biodiversity in theregion. We recommendthe implementation of conservation strategies to protect these vital ecosystems from further damage.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Great job! I just added some missing articles."
In a recent study conducted at the university, we explored the impact of climate change on marine ecosystems in the Arabian Gulf. Our findings indicate that a rise in sea temperature has made a significant effect on coral reefs, which are crucial for biodiversity in the region. We recommend the implementation of conservation strategies to protect these vital ecosystems from further damage.
In recent study conducted at university, we explored impact of climate change on marine ecosystems in Arabian Gulf. Our findings indicate that rise in sea temperature has significant effect on coral reefs, which are crucial for biodiversity in region. We recommend implementation of conservation strategies to protect these vital ecosystems from further damage.
Academic Writing / Dissertation
Overuse of passive voice
In the study, it was found that the effects of climate change on desert ecosystems are significant. The data was collected over a period of five years, and it was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is suggested that fFurther research is needed to understand the long-term impacts, and it is recommended thato inform policymakersare informed of these findings to take necessary actions.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Well done! I just made changes to some (not all) of the passive voice constructions."
In the study, it was found that the effects of climate change on desert ecosystems are significant. The data was collected over a period of five years, and it was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. Further research is needed to understand the long-term impacts, and it is recommended to inform policymakers of these findings to take necessary actions.
In the study, it was found that the effects of climate change on desert ecosystems are significant. The data was collected over a period of five years, and it was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is suggested that further research is needed to understand the long-term impacts, and it is recommended that policymakers are informed of these findings to take necessary actions.
Academic Writing / Essay
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
In recent years, education inthe United Arab Emirates has seen significant improvements. GThe government has invested heavily in infrastructure and technology to enhance the learning experience for students. As a result, many schools now have access to modern facilities and resources. However, there is still aneed for more qualified teachers to meet thegrowing demand in theeducation sector.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some revising to correct for missing articles ("the," "a," etc.)."
In recent years, education in the United Arab Emirates has seen significant improvements. The government has invested heavily in infrastructure and technology to enhance the learning experience for students. As a result, many schools now have access to modern facilities and resources. However, there is still a need for more qualified teachers to meet the growing demand in the education sector.
In recent years, education in United Arab Emirates has seen significant improvements. Government has invested heavily in infrastructure and technology to enhance learning experience for students. As a result, many schools now have access to modern facilities and resources. However, there is still need for more qualified teachers to meet growing demand in education sector.
Academic Writing / Lab Report
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
In this experiment, we observedthe reaction of chemical A with water. The purpose was to determine therate of reaction under different temperatures. We useda beaker and thermometer to measure temperature changes. RThe results showed thatthe reaction was faster at higher temperatures, confirming thehypothesis.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"This is fairly well-written. However, don't forget to use articles in your sentences: for example, "we observed reaction of chemical A with water" should be "we observed the reaction of chemical A with water" and "was to determine rate of reaction" should be "was to determine the rate of reaction"."
In this experiment, we observed the reaction of chemical A with water. The purpose was to determine the rate of reaction under different temperatures. We used a beaker and thermometer to measure temperature changes. The results showed that the reaction was faster at higher temperatures, confirming the hypothesis.
In this experiment, we observed reaction of chemical A with water. The purpose was to determine rate of reaction under different temperatures. We used beaker and thermometer to measure temperature changes. Results showed that reaction was faster at higher temperatures, confirming hypothesis.
Academic Writing / Literature Review
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
In recent studies on climate change, researchers hasve focused onthe impact of rising temperatures on marine life. The literature highlights howan increase in ocean temperatures affects coral reefs, leading to bleaching events. However, there isa gap in understanding how these changes influence fish migration patterns. This review aims to address this gap by analyzing data from theGulf region, where unique environmental conditions provide valuable insights.
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I added articles before some of the nouns. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."
In recent studies on climate change, researchers have focused on the impact of rising temperatures on marine life. The literature highlights how an increase in ocean temperatures affects coral reefs, leading to bleaching events. However, there is a gap in understanding how these changes influence fish migration patterns. This review aims to address this gap by analyzing data from the Gulf region, where unique environmental conditions provide valuable insights.
In recent studies on climate change, researcher has focused on impact of rising temperatures on marine life. The literature highlights how increase in ocean temperatures affects coral reefs, leading to bleaching events. However, there is gap in understanding how these changes influence fish migration patterns. This review aims to address this gap by analyzing data from Gulf region, where unique environmental conditions provide valuable insights.
Academic Writing / Research Paper
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
Ina recent study conducted ata university in Dubai, we examined theimpact of social media onthe academic performance of students. Our findings indicate that excessive use of social media platforms can lead toa decrease in students' concentration levels during lectures. Furthermore, we observed that students who limit their social media usage tend to perform better in exams compthared ton those who do not.
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Vince, United States
"Just a few minor tweaks to add articles before nouns :) Nice work! "
In a recent study conducted at a university in Dubai, we examined the impact of social media on the academic performance of students. Our findings indicate that excessive use of social media platforms can lead to a decrease in students' concentration levels during lectures. Furthermore, we observed that students who limit their social media usage tend to perform better in exams than those who do not.
In recent study conducted at university in Dubai, we examined impact of social media on academic performance of students. Our findings indicate that excessive use of social media platforms can lead to decrease in students' concentration levels during lectures. Furthermore, we observed that students who limit their social media usage tend to perform better in exams compared to those who do not.
Academic Writing / Thesis
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
In this thesis, I explore the impact of climate change on agriculture inthe United Arab Emirates. The study focuses on how rising temperatures and changing precipitation patterns affect crop yields and water resources. By analyzing thedata fromthe past decade, I aim to provide acomprehensive understanding ofthe challenges faced by farmers and propose strategies for adaptation.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Very good! I just needed to add some missing articles."
In this thesis, I explore the impact of climate change on agriculture in the United Arab Emirates. The study focuses on how rising temperatures and changing precipitation patterns affect crop yields and water resources. By analyzing the data from the past decade, I aim to provide a comprehensive understanding of the challenges faced by farmers and propose strategies for adaptation.
In this thesis, I explore impact of climate change on agriculture in United Arab Emirates. The study focuses on how rising temperatures and changing precipitation patterns affect crop yields and water resources. By analyzing data from past decade, I aim to provide comprehensive understanding of challenges faced by farmers and propose strategies for adaptation.