This page focuses on errors typically made by native Korean speakers from South Korea when writing a Bio Pages in English.
Omitting articles ('a', 'an', 'the')
John Kim isan experienced software engineer with over ten years inthe industry. He graduated from Seoul National University with adegree in computer science. Currently, he is leading ateam ata tech company in Seoul, focusing onthe development of innovative solutions for clients.
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Camille, Maryland, USA
"Don't forget to use articles such as "a," "an," and "the.""
John Kim is an experienced software engineer with over ten years in the industry. He graduated from Seoul National University with a degree in computer science. Currently, he is leading a team at a tech company in Seoul, focusing on the development of innovative solutions for clients.
John Kim is experienced software engineer with over ten years in industry. He graduated from Seoul National University with degree in computer science. Currently, he is leading team at tech company in Seoul, focusing on development of innovative solutions for clients.
Incorrect word order in complex sentences
John Kim is a marketing specialist who worksin Seoulworks for a leading technology company. With over ten years of experience, he has developed strategies that aresuccessfulare in increasing brand awareness and customer engagement. In his free time, heenjoyshe hiking and exploring new places, which inspire him to think creatively in his professional projects.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"This is mostly fine. However, be mindful of your use of word order - for example: "who in Seoul works" should be "who works in Seoul" and "that successful are" should be "that are successful"."
John Kim is a marketing specialist who works in Seoul for a leading technology company. With over ten years of experience, he has developed strategies that are successful in increasing brand awareness and customer engagement. In his free time, he enjoys hiking and exploring new places, which inspire him to think creatively in his professional projects.
John Kim is a marketing specialist who in Seoul works for a leading technology company. With over ten years of experience, he has developed strategies that successful are in increasing brand awareness and customer engagement. In his free time, enjoys he hiking and exploring new places, which inspire him to think creatively in his professional projects.
Confusion with prepositions ('in', 'on', 'at')
Hello, my name is Jisoo Kim, and I am currently working inat marketing department in Seoul. I have been with the company for over five years, and I specialize in developing strategies fonr digital platforms. I graduated from university in 2015, and Ihave a degree in Business Administration.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some corrections for improper prepositional phrasing."
Hello, my name is Jisoo Kim, and I am currently working in a marketing department in Seoul. I have been with the company for over five years, and I specialize in developing strategies for digital platforms. I graduated from university in 2015, and have a degree in Business Administration.
Hello, my name is Jisoo Kim, and I am currently working at marketing department in Seoul. I have been with the company for over five years, and I specialize in developing strategies on digital platforms. I graduated from university in 2015, and I have a degree in Business Administration.