Common English Mistakes in Slogans by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Slogan in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

At Al-Riyadh Electronics, I am honorbed tolinform you thateve our latest smartphone is the pinnacle of innovation and excellence. Weare deeply privileged to offer you this extraordinary device that will elevate your communication experience to new heights. Choose Al-Riyadh Electronics, where we are profoundly grateful toserve your technological needs with utmostdedication.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make it sound a bit more natural :)"

At Al-Riyadh Electronics, I believe our latest smartphone is the pinnacle of innovation and excellence. We offer you this extraordinary device that will elevate your communication experience to new heights. Choose Al-Riyadh Electronics, where we serve your technological needs with dedication.

At Al-Riyadh Electronics, I am honored to inform you that our latest smartphone is the pinnacle of innovation and excellence. We are deeply privileged to offer you this extraordinary device that will elevate your communication experience to new heights. Choose Al-Riyadh Electronics, where we are profoundly grateful to serve your technological needs with utmost dedication.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

"Experience the taste of tradition, where every bite takes you back to theyour roots. Our spices bring aflavor that makes your meal unforgettable. Choose us, and you willalways find the authentic taste you seek."

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Good work! I just made some adjustments to the verb tense."

Experience the taste of tradition, where every bite takes you back to your roots. Our spices bring a flavor that makes your meal unforgettable. Choose us, and you will always find the authentic taste you seek."

"Experience the taste of tradition, where every bite take you back to the roots. Our spices bring flavor that make your meal unforgettable. Choose us, and you always find the authentic taste you seek."

Mistake Example #3

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

"Discover the magic of our new perfume, whereiche captures her essence winth every drop. Let thims be the fragrance that defines her style, and watch as heit transforms her world with hits enchanting aroma. Experience the allure that only this perfume can bring to her life."

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Very nice! I made some changes to the text (particularly some of the male pronouns) so the English would sound more natural."

Discover the magic of our new perfume, which captures her essence with every drop. Let this be the fragrance that defines her style, and watch as it transforms her world with its enchanting aroma. Experience the allure that only this perfume can bring to her life.

"Discover the magic of our new perfume, where he captures her essence in every drop. Let him be the fragrance that defines her style, and watch as he transforms her world with his enchanting aroma. Experience the allure that only he can bring to her life."