Common English Mistakes in Patient Information Leaflets by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Patient Information Leaflet in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of passive voice

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Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was well-written – I just made a few minor changes to reduce the use of passive voice :)"

The medication is to be taken twice daily, and you are advised to take it with food. Monitor the side effects closely and report any unusual symptoms to the doctor immediately. You are advised to read the leaflet carefully before starting the medication, and follow all instructions as prescribed.

The medication is to be taken twice daily, and it is advised that it is taken with food. The side effects are to be monitored closely, and any unusual symptoms should be reported to the doctor immediately. It is recommended that the leaflet is read carefully before the medication is started, and all instructions are followed as prescribed.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Take one tablet of medicine aftera meal every day. If you experience aheadache or dizziness, consult adoctor immediately. Keep thismedicine out ofthe reach of children and store it ina cool, dry place.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I just added a few words, mainly articles. Well done!"

Take one tablet of medicine after a meal every day. If you experience a headache or dizziness, consult a doctor immediately. Keep this medicine out of the reach of children and store it in a cool, dry place.

Take one tablet of medicine after meal every day. If you experience headache or dizziness, consult doctor immediately. Keep medicine out of reach of children and store in cool, dry place.