Common English Mistakes in Investor Pitches by Slovak Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Slovak speakers from Slovakia when writing a Investor Pitch in English.

Mistake Example #1

Incorrect placement of adjectives ('The car red' instead of 'The red car')

Dear Investors, wWe are excited to presentto you our company innovative, which is revolutionizing the industrytechnologyindustry. Ourteam dedicatedteam has developed a uniqueproductunique that addresses the needs of markthet growingmarket. We believe that with your supportfinancialsupport, we can expand our reach and bring effecthive solutioneffectives to more customers throughout theworldwide.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the word order so that the adjectives come before the nouns they modify. Otherwise, the ideas in this text were clearly expressed."

Dear Investors, We are excited to present to you our company innovative, which is revolutionizing the technology industry. Our dedicated team has developed a unique product that addresses the needs of the growing market . We believe that with your financial support, we can expand our reach and bring effective solutions to more customers throughout the world.

Dear Investors, we are excited to present you our company innovative, which is revolutionizing the industry technology. Our team dedicated has developed a product unique that addresses the needs of market growing. We believe that with your support financial, we can expand our reach and bring the solution effective to more customers worldwide.

Mistake Example #2

Omitting 'it' as a subject in dummy subject sentences ('Is raining' instead of 'It is raining')

Dear Investors,This isan exciting opportunity to invest in our innovative tech startup. OIt offersa unique solution to common problem faced by many industries. With your support, wecan expand rapidly and achieve asignificant market share.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Good work! I made some corrections to the text, including adding the subjects and some articles that were missing."

Dear Investors, This is an exciting opportunity to invest in our innovative tech startup. It offers a unique solution to common problem faced by many industries. With your support, we can expand rapidly and achieve a significant market share.

Dear Investors, is exciting opportunity to invest in our innovative tech startup. Offers unique solution to common problem faced by many industries. With your support, can expand rapidly and achieve significant market share.

Mistake Example #3

Struggles with perfect tenses ('I am here since three years')

Dear Investors,I hamve been working on this innovative project sincefor two years, and I believe it has great potential to revolutionize the industry. Our team hstas brteend developing the technologysince last year, and we are confident that it will meet the market needs effectively. We are seeking your support to bring this project to the next level and achieve success together.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Nice work! I just made a couple of changes to the verb tense."

Dear Investors, I have been working on this innovative project for two years, and I believe it has great potential to revolutionize the industry. Our team started developing the technology last year, and we are confident that it will meet the market needs effectively. We are seeking your support to bring this project to the next level and achieve success together.

Dear Investors, I am working on this innovative project since two years, and I believe it has great potential to revolutionize the industry. Our team has been developing the technology since last year, and we are confident that it will meet the market needs effectively. We are seeking your support to bring this project to the next level and achieve success together.