Common English Mistakes in Investor Pitches by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Investor Pitch in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of passive voice

OuWe are developing an innovative tech solutionis being developed to revolutionize the retail industry. TWe are designing the unique features of our productare being designed to enhance customer experience and increase sales efficiency. A significant investment is being sought to expand our operations and bring this groundbreaking technology to the market.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I changed some of the passive voice constructions to the active voice to improve the flow of the text. Nice work!"

We are developing an innovative tech solution to revolutionize the retail industry. We are designing the unique features of our product to enhance customer experience and increase sales efficiency. A significant investment is being sought to expand our operations and bring this groundbreaking technology to the market.

Our innovative tech solution is being developed to revolutionize the retail industry. The unique features of our product are being designed to enhance customer experience and increase sales efficiency. A significant investment is being sought to expand our operations and bring this groundbreaking technology to the market.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

Esteemed Investors, we are excited to present you with anopportunity to invest in an innovative tech startup based in Dubai. Our company has developed unique software that revolutionizes theway businesses manage data. With your support, we can expand ourreach and bring oursolution tothe global market.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Overall your writing was very professional; it just needed a few tweaks to make things consistent. Good job!"

Esteemed Investors, we are excited to present you with an opportunity to invest in an innovative tech startup based in Dubai. Our company has developed unique software that revolutionizes the way businesses manage data. With your support, we can expand our reach and bring our solution to the global market.

Esteemed Investors, we are excited to present you opportunity to invest in innovative tech startup based in Dubai. Our company has developed unique software that revolutionizes way businesses manage data. With your support, we can expand reach and bring solution to global market.