Common English Mistakes in Newsletters by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Newsletter in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Hello Subscribers, EWe have some exciting news to share this month! IThisis a great opportunity to join our upcoming workshop on digital marketing strategies. WIt will take place on 15thNovember15th at Taipei City Hall. Don't missthe chance to learn from industry experts and improve your skills. Sign up today and be part of this amazing event!

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I added the subject (noun doing the action) to some of the sentences that needed it, and I made some additional changes to make the English sound more natural to a native speaker."

Hello Subscribers, We have some exciting news to share this month! This is a great opportunity to join our upcoming workshop on digital marketing strategies. It will take place on November 15th at Taipei City Hall. Don't miss the chance to learn from industry experts and improve your skills. Sign up today and be part of this amazing event!

Hello Subscribers, Exciting news to share this month! Is great opportunity to join our upcoming workshop on digital marketing strategies. Will take place on 15th November at Taipei City Hall. Don't miss chance to learn from industry experts and improve your skills. Sign up today and be part of this amazing event!

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Hello, everyone, we are excited to announce our upcoming event at the Taipei Art Center! There isare many exciting activities planned for the day, including workshops and live performances. We hope you can join us and bring your friends, as there arwill be much opportunity to learn and have fun together. Don't miss out on this chance to experience something special with us!

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Very good! Just a couple of changes to make sure the writing is consistent."

Hello, everyone, we are excited to announce our upcoming event at the Taipei Art Center! There are many exciting activities planned for the day, including workshops and live performances. We hope you can join us and bring your friends, as there will be much opportunity to learn and have fun together. Don't miss out on this chance to experience something special with us!

Hello everyone, we are excited to announce our upcoming event at the Taipei Art Center! There is many exciting activities planned for the day, including workshops and live performances. We hope you can join us and bring your friends, as there are much opportunity to learn and have fun together. Don't miss out on this chance to experience something special with us!

Mistake Example #3

Using overly formal or direct language

Dear Valued Customer,We Itare is wexcith utmost importanced that weo inform you about our new product launch. We sincerelyhope you will find it satisfactory and that itmeets your high expectations. Please be advised to visit our store at your earliest convenience to experience the product firsthand. Your presence will be greatly appreciated.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I changed the wording a little to make it sound less formal and more appropriate for this context."

Dear Valued Customer, We are excited to inform you about our new product launch. We hope you will find it satisfactory and that it meets your high expectations. Please be advised to visit our store at your earliest convenience to experience the product firsthand. Your presence will be greatly appreciated.

Dear Valued Customer, It is with utmost importance that we inform you about our new product launch. We sincerely hope you will find it satisfactory and meet your high expectations. Please be advised to visit our store at your earliest convenience to experience the product firsthand. Your presence will be greatly appreciated.