This page focuses on errors typically made by native German speakers from Germany when writing in English.
Academic Writing / Academic Journal Article
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
In the recent Sstudy on Cclimate Cchange, the Iimpact of Hhuman Aactivities on Gglobal Wwarming was extensively analyzed. The Rresearch highlights the Rrole of Iindustrialization and Uurbanization in increasing Ccarbon Eemissions. Furthermore, the Sstudy emphasizes the Iimportance of Rrenewable Eenergy Ssources in mitigating Eenvironmental Ddamage.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Hello, there! Some of these words did not need to be capitalized, so I changed them to lower case."
In the recent study on climate change, the impact of human activities on global warming was extensively analyzed. The research highlights the role of industrialization and urbanization in increasing carbon emissions. Furthermore, the study emphasizes the importance of renewable energy sources in mitigating environmental damage.
In the recent Study on Climate Change, the Impact of Human Activities on Global Warming was extensively analyzed. The Research highlights the Role of Industrialization and Urbanization in increasing Carbon Emissions. Furthermore, the Study emphasizes the Importance of Renewable Energy Sources in mitigating Environmental Damage.
Business Writing / Annual Report
Incorrect word order in subordinate clauses
In the2023 fiscal year2023, we have seen significant growth in our European markets, which has been driven by our innovative product lines and strategic partnerships. Although the economic conditions werechallengingwere, our team successfully navigated these obstacles by focusing on efficiency and customer satisfaction. As we move forward, it is crucial that we continue to invest in research and development, so that we can maintain our competitive edge in the industry.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Great job! I just made a few changes to the word order."
In the 2023 fiscal year, we have seen significant growth in our European markets, which has been driven by our innovative product lines and strategic partnerships. Although the economic conditions were challenging, our team successfully navigated these obstacles by focusing on efficiency and customer satisfaction. As we move forward, it is crucial that we continue to invest in research and development, so that we can maintain our competitive edge in the industry.
In the fiscal year 2023, we have seen significant growth in our European markets, which has been driven by our innovative product lines and strategic partnerships. Although the economic conditions challenging were, our team successfully navigated these obstacles by focusing on efficiency and customer satisfaction. As we move forward, it is crucial that we continue to invest in research and development, so that we can maintain our competitive edge in the industry.
Educational & Instructional Writing / E-learning Module
Overuse of passive voice
In tThis module,explains the concept of photosynthesis. It details explained. The process bywhich plants convert sunlight into energy isandescribed in detail. It is ensureds thatthe steps are understood by learners, understandeach step of the process. It also highlights the importance of chlorophyllis highlighted. TheA quiz at the end is designed totests the knowledge thleatrners has bveen gained.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"These needed some tweaking to remove instances of passive voice."
This module explains the concept of photosynthesis. It details how plants convert sunlight into energy and ensures that learners understand each step of the process. It also highlights the importance of chlorophyll. A quiz at the end tests the knowledge learners have gained.
In this module, the concept of photosynthesis is explained. The process by which plants convert sunlight into energy is described in detail. It is ensured that the steps are understood by learners, and the importance of chlorophyll is highlighted. The quiz at the end is designed to test the knowledge that has been gained.
ESL Writing / Email Practice
Overuse of passive voice
Dear Mr. Smith,it is hHoped that the meeting wifullbe attended by, all team members. Twill attend the rmeporeting. wasI completed bythe mreport yesterday, and it isshouggesteld that it isbe reviewed before the presentation. If anyone has any questionsare had, please let me know.Best regards,Hans.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed the passive voice to the active voice to improve the flow of the text. Good work!"
Dear Mr. Smith, Hopefully, all team members will attend the meeting. I completed the report yesterday, and it should be reviewed before the presentation. If anyone has any questions, please let me know. Best regards, Hans.
Dear Mr. Smith, it is hoped that the meeting will be attended by all team members. The report was completed by me yesterday, and it is suggested that it is reviewed before the presentation. If any questions are had, please let me know. Best regards, Hans.
Fiction & Creative Writing / Creative Nonfiction
Overuse of passive voice
In the quiet village of Oberndorf, the townspeople witnesseda mysterious eventwas witnessed by the townspeople. The old church bell, which had not rung for decades, was heard echoing through the valley. It wMasny believedby many that the bell was rung by the spirits of the past, who were said to be restless on stormy nights.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Great job! I just changed some (not all) of the passive voice phrases to the active voice."
In the quiet village of Oberndorf, the townspeople witnessed a mysterious event. The old church bell, which had not rung for decades, was heard echoing through the valley. Many believed that the bell was rung by the spirits of the past, who were said to be restless on stormy nights.
In the quiet village of Oberndorf, a mysterious event was witnessed by the townspeople. The old church bell, which had not rung for decades, was heard echoing through the valley. It was believed by many that the bell was rung by the spirits of the past, who were said to be restless on stormy nights.
Government & Policy Writing / Government Memo
Incorrect word order in subordinate clauses
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy In response to recent developments, it is necessary that we implementthe new policyimplement by the end of the month. It is important, thatfor all departments to review their proceduresreview to ensure compliance. Should any questions arise, please contact the policy team, who will beavailable will be to assist.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Good job overall! It just needed some changes to the word order."
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy In response to recent developments, it is necessary that we implement the new policy by the end of the month. It is important for all departments to review their procedures to ensure compliance. Should any questions arise, please contact the policy team, who will be available to assist.
To: All Department Heads Subject: Implementation of New Policy In response to recent developments, it is necessary that we the new policy implement by the end of the month. It is important, that all departments their procedures review to ensure compliance. Should any questions arise, please contact the policy team, who available will be to assist.
Healthcare & Medical Writing / Clinical Study
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
The Cclinical Sstudy was conducted to evaluate the Eeffectiveness of the new Ddrug in treating Ppatients with Cchronic Ppain. The Sstudy involved 100 Pparticipants from various Hhospitals across Germany, and the Rresults showed a significant Iimprovement in Ppain Llevels after six Wweeks of Ttreatment. Further Rresearch is needed to confirm these Ffindings and to explore the potential Sside Eeffects of the Ddrug.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Capitals are not necessary for common nouns (non-specific people, places, things, or ideas)."
The clinical study was conducted to evaluate the effectiveness of the new drug in treating patients with chronic pain. The study involved 100 participants from various hospitals across Germany, and the results showed a significant improvement in pain levels after six weeks of treatment. Further research is needed to confirm these findings and to explore the potential side effects of the drug.
The Clinical Study was conducted to evaluate the Effectiveness of the new Drug in treating Patients with Chronic Pain. The Study involved 100 Participants from various Hospitals across Germany, and the Results showed a significant Improvement in Pain Levels after six Weeks of Treatment. Further Research is needed to confirm these Findings and to explore the potential Side Effects of the Drug.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
In my Ccareer Portfolio, I have included several important Ddocuments that highlight my Sskills and Aachievements. My Eexperience in Pproject Mmanagement and Tteam Lleadership has been a significant Aasset in my Pprofessional Ddevelopment. I am confident that my Bbackground in Eengineering and my Ppassion for Iinnovation will enable me to make valuable Ccontributions to any Ccompany.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the capitalized nouns to lower case and polished up the last sentence, but otherwise this is well-written."
In my career Portfolio, I have included several important documents that highlight my skills and achievements. My experience in project management and team leadership has been a significant asset in my professional development. I am confident that my background in engineering and my passion for innovation will enable me to make valuable contributions to any company.
In my Career Portfolio, I have included several important Documents that highlight my Skills and Achievements. My Experience in Project Management and Team Leadership has been a significant Asset in my Professional Development. I am confident that my Background in Engineering and my Passion for Innovation will be valuable Contributions to any Company.
Journalism & Media / Editorial
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
In the recent Ddebate about Cclimate Cchange, many Ppoliticians have expressed their Cconcerns about the rising Ttemperatures and the Iimpact on our Eenvironment. However, some Eexperts argue that the Ffocus should also be on the Rrole of Ttechnology in mitigating these Eeffects. It is crucial for Ggovernments to invest in sustainable Ssolutions and encourage Iinnovation to protect our Pplanet for future Ggenerations.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to correct capitalization errors."
In the recent debate about climate change, many politicians have expressed their concerns about the rising temperatures and the impact on our environment. However, some experts argue that the focus should also be on the role of technology in mitigating these effects. It is crucial for governments to invest in sustainable solutions and encourage innovation to protect our planet for future generations.
In the recent Debate about Climate Change, many Politicians have expressed their Concerns about the rising Temperatures and the Impact on our Environment. However, some Experts argue that the Focus should also be on the Role of Technology in mitigating these Effects. It is crucial for Governments to invest in sustainable Solutions and encourage Innovation to protect our Planet for future Generations.
Legal & Formal Writing / Agreement
Incorrect word order in subordinate clauses
This Agreement is entered into by the parties, who agree that, if the terms are fulfilled, the contract will be extended. It is important that, the conditions are met, the payment will be processed within 30 days. The parties agree that, should any disputes arise, they will be resolved through arbitration.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"The text has some issues, but none with word order."
This Agreement is entered into by the parties, who agree that, if the terms are fulfilled, the contract will be extended. It is important that, the conditions are met, the payment will be processed within 30 days. The parties agree that, should any disputes arise, they will be resolved through arbitration.
This Agreement is entered into by the parties, who agree that, if the terms are fulfilled, the contract will be extended. It is important that, the conditions are met, the payment will be processed within 30 days. The parties agree that, should any disputes arise, they will be resolved through arbitration.
Marketing & Advertising Writing / Ad Copy
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
Discover the Ppower of our Nnew Ffitness Pprogram! At our Ggym, we offer personalized Ttraining Pplans that help you achieve your Hhealth Ggoals. Join us today and experience the Bbenefits of Eexpert Gguidance and Sstate-of-the-Aart Eequipment. Don't miss the Oopportunity to transform your Llife with our Sspecial Mmembership Ooffer!
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Capitals are not necessary for common nouns (non-specific people, places, things, or ideas)."
Discover the power of our new fitness program! At our gym, we offer personalized training plans that help you achieve your health goals. Join us today and experience the benefits of expert guidance and state-of-the-art equipment. Don't miss the opportunity to transform your life with our special membership offer!
Discover the Power of our New Fitness Program! At our Gym, we offer personalized Training Plans that help you achieve your Health Goals. Join us today and experience the Benefits of Expert Guidance and State-of-the-Art Equipment. Don't miss the Opportunity to transform your Life with our Special Membership Offer!
Personal & Lifestyle Writing / Journal Entry
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
Today was a very interesting Dday. I went to the Ppark with my Ffriend, Anna, and we had a lovely Ppicnic under the big Ooak Ttree. The Wweather was perfect, and we enjoyed watching the Dducks swim in the Ppond. Later, we visited a small Ccafé nearby and had delicious Ccake with Ccoffee. It was a wonderful Aafternoon, and I felt very happy to spend Ttime with such a good Ffriend.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Capitals are not necessary for common nouns (non-specific people, places, things, or ideas)."
Today was a very interesting day. I went to the park with my friend, Anna, and we had a lovely picnic under the big oak tree. The weather was perfect, and we enjoyed watching the ducks swim in the pond. Later, we visited a small café nearby and had delicious cake with coffee. It was a wonderful afternoon, and I felt very happy to spend time with such a good friend.
Today was a very interesting Day. I went to the Park with my Friend Anna, and we had a lovely Picnic under the big Oak Tree. The Weather was perfect, and we enjoyed watching the Ducks swim in the Pond. Later, we visited a small Café nearby and had delicious Cake with Coffee. It was a wonderful Afternoon, and I felt very happy to spend Time with such a good Friend.
Social Media & Online Writing / Blog Post
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
Last Wweekend, I visited the Bbeautiful Ccity of Berlin with my Ffriends. We explored many interesting Pplaces, including the famous Brandenburg Gate and the vibrant Nneighborhood of Kreuzberg. The Wweather was perfect, and we enjoyed delicious Ffood at a local Rrestaurant.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Capitals are not necessary for common nouns (non-specific people, places, things, or ideas)."
Last weekend, I visited the beautiful city of Berlin with my friends. We explored many interesting places, including the famous Brandenburg Gate and the vibrant neighborhood of Kreuzberg. The weather was perfect, and we enjoyed delicious food at a local restaurant.
Last Weekend, I visited the Beautiful City of Berlin with my Friends. We explored many interesting Places, including the famous Brandenburg Gate and the vibrant Neighborhood of Kreuzberg. The Weather was perfect, and we enjoyed delicious Food at a local Restaurant.
Student / Admission Essay
Overuse of passive voice
AI have dreamed of applying to your esteemed university has been a dream of minefor many years. TI see the opportunity to study inat such a prestigious institution is seen as a significant step in my academic journey. MThe innovative projects developed in your labs sparked my passion for engineeringwas inspired by the innovative projects that are developed in your labs, and I am eager to contribute to thisat environment.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to reduce the use of passive voice."
I have dreamed of applying to your esteemed university for many years. I see the opportunity to study at such a prestigious institution as a significant step in my academic journey. The innovative projects developed in your labs sparked my passion for engineering, and I am eager to contribute to that environment.
Applying to your esteemed university has been a dream of mine for many years. The opportunity to study in such a prestigious institution is seen as a significant step in my academic journey. My passion for engineering was inspired by the innovative projects that are developed in your labs, and I am eager to contribute to this environment.
Technical & Scientific Writing / Engineering Specification
Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)
The Eengineering Sspecification outlines the Ddesign Rrequirements for the new Hhydraulic Ssystem. The Ssystem must operate under Ppressure Cconditions of up to 300 Bbars and maintain Eefficiency Llevels above 85 Ppercent. All Ccomponents should be made from Ccorrosion-Rresistant Mmaterials to ensure Llongevity and Rreliability in various Eenvironmental Cconditions.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the capital letters to lower case, per the rules of English grammar. Nice job overall!"
The engineering specification outlines the design requirements for the new hydraulic system. The system must operate under pressure conditions of up to 300 bars and maintain efficiency levels above 85 percent. All components should be made from corrosion-resistant materials to ensure longevity and reliability in various environmental conditions.
The Engineering Specification outlines the Design Requirements for the new Hydraulic System. The System must operate under Pressure Conditions of up to 300 Bar and maintain Efficiency Levels above 85 Percent. All Components should be made from Corrosion-Resistant Materials to ensure Longevity and Reliability in various Environmental Conditions.