Common English Mistakes in Press Releases by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Press Release in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Taipei, October 10, 2023 – EWe are excited to announce the launch of our new product line, which will revolutionize the tech industry. It is crucial for us to stay ahead in innovation and provide thebest solutions to our customers. LWe looking forward to seeing apositive impact onthe market and strengthening our position as anindustry leader.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I added subjects and articles to some phrases according to proper English grammar. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Taipei, October 10, 2023 – We are excited to announce the launch of our new product line, which will revolutionize the tech industry. It is crucial for us to stay ahead in innovation and provide the best solutions to our customers. We look forward to seeing a positive impact on the market and strengthening our position as an industry leader.

Taipei, October 10, 2023 – Excited to announce the launch of our new product line, which will revolutionize the tech industry. Is crucial for us to stay ahead in innovation and provide best solutions to our customers. Looking forward to seeing positive impact on market and strengthen our position as industry leader.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: Taipei, Taiwan – We are excited to announce the grand opening of our new store in the heart of the city. There isare many exciting offers and exclusive products available for our valued customers. Our team haves worked hard to ensure that there is something special for everyone.

Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA

"Just a few small corrections. "

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: Taipei, Taiwan – We are excited to announce the grand opening of our new store in the heart of the city. There are many exciting offers and exclusive products available for our valued customers. Our team has worked hard to ensure that there is something special for everyone.

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: Taipei, Taiwan – We are excited to announce the grand opening of our new store in the heart of the city. There is many exciting offers and exclusive products available for our valued customers. Our team have worked hard to ensure that there is something special for everyone.

Mistake Example #3

Using overly formal or direct language

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: We hereby announce the grand opening of our new Taipei branch, which will occur on15th November15th. It is with great pleasure that wWe invite allour esteemed partners and valued customers to attend this significant event, as your presence will greatly honor us. Please be informed that tThe ceremony will commence at 10:00 AMa.m. sharp, and we sincelook forelyward anticipateo youresteemed attendance.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the phrasing to make the sentences sound more straightforward."

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: We hereby announce the grand opening of our new Taipei branch on November 15th. We invite all our esteemed partners and valued customers to attend this significant event, as your presence will greatly honor us. The ceremony will commence at 10:00 a.m. sharp, and we look forward to your attendance.

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: We hereby announce the grand opening of our new Taipei branch, which will occur on 15th November. It is with great pleasure that we invite all esteemed partners and valued customers to attend this significant event, as your presence will greatly honor us. Please be informed that the ceremony will commence at 10 AM sharp, and we sincerely anticipate your esteemed attendance.