This page focuses on errors typically made by native Korean speakers from South Korea when writing in English.
| Category: | Job Applications & Professional Development Writing for job applications and career growth. |
| Common Users: | Job Seekers, Career Coaches. |
Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio
Incorrect word order in complex sentences
As a dedicated professional with over five years of experience in marketing, I have developed skills in digital strategy and content creation, which I believe arwill be valuable to your company. In my previous role, I led a teamsuccessfullyled a team to increase brand awareness by 30% within six months, demonstrating my ability to manage projects effectively. MI am confident that my passion for innovation and commitment to excellence, I am confident, will contribute significantly to your team.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed the word order in certain sentences and made a couple of other minor tweaks. Nice work!"
As a dedicated professional with over five years of experience in marketing, I have developed skills in digital strategy and content creation, which I believe will be valuable to your company. In my previous role, I successfully led a team to increase brand awareness by 30% within six months, demonstrating my ability to manage projects effectively. I am confident that my passion for innovation and commitment to excellence will contribute significantly to your team.
As a dedicated professional with over five years of experience in marketing, I have developed skills in digital strategy and content creation, which I believe are valuable to your company. In my previous role, I led a team successfully to increase brand awareness by 30% within six months, demonstrating my ability to manage projects effectively. My passion for innovation and commitment to excellence, I am confident, will contribute significantly to your team.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Cover Letter
Omitting articles ('a', 'an', 'the')
Dear Hiring Manager,I am writing to express my interest inthe position of software developer at your company. I have experience in developing applications and Ibelieve I can contribute to yourteam. I am excited about thisopportunity to work withan innovative company like yours.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I added some articles and a few other words to make the English sound more natural. Good work!"
Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express my interest in the position of software developer at your company. I have experience in developing applications and I believe I can contribute to your team. I am excited about this opportunity to work with an innovative company like yours.
Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express my interest in position of software developer at your company. I have experience in developing applications and believe I can contribute to team. I am excited about opportunity to work with innovative company like yours.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Interview Follow-Up Email
Omitting articles ('a', 'an', 'the')
Dear Hiring Manager, I wanted to express gratitude for theopportunity to interview fora position last week. I am very excited about thepossibility of joiningthe team and contributing tothe company. Please let me know if thyou nereisd any further informationyou need from me. Thank you for considering my application.
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Vince, United States
"Your ideas were clear :) I just made a few small changes to improve the flow and polish things up. "
Dear Hiring Manager, I wanted to express gratitude for the opportunity to interview for a position last week. I am very excited about the possibility of joining the team and contributing to the company. Please let me know if you need any further information from me. Thank you for considering my application.
Dear Hiring Manager, I wanted to express gratitude for opportunity to interview for position last week. I am very excited about possibility of joining team and contributing to company. Please let me know if there is any further information you need from me. Thank you for considering my application.
Job Applications & Professional Development / LinkedIn Profile
Omitting articles ('a', 'an', 'the')
Experienced software engineer witha strong background in developing web applications. Graduated from Seoul National University witha degree in Computer Science. Passionate about creating innovative solutions and improving user experience. Currently seeking anopportunity to joina dynamic team where I can contribute myskills and grow professionally.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Good work! I just added some articles to make the English sound more natural. "
Experienced software engineer with a strong background in developing web applications. Graduated from Seoul National University with a degree in Computer Science. Passionate about creating innovative solutions and improving user experience. Currently seeking an opportunity to join a dynamic team where I can contribute my skills and grow professionally.
Experienced software engineer with strong background in developing web applications. Graduated from Seoul National University with degree in Computer Science. Passionate about creating innovative solutions and improving user experience. Currently seeking opportunity to join dynamic team where I can contribute skills and grow professionally.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Personal Statement
Incorrect word order in complex sentences
As a dedicated and passionate individual, I am applying for the marketing position because I believe that my skills, which I have developed through various experiences, are well-suited for this role. In my previous job, I led a teamsuccessfullyled a team to increase sales by 20%,. wThichs was a challengingtask, but rewardingtask. My ability to learn fast andapt quicklyadapt to new environmentsand learn fast, I think, will be beneficial to your company.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the word order to make the English sound more natural. I also made some stylistic improvements."
As a dedicated and passionate individual, I am applying for the marketing position because I believe that my skills, which I have developed through various experiences, are well-suited for this role. In my previous job, I successfully led a team to increase sales by 20%. This was a challenging, but rewarding task. My ability to learn fast and quickly adapt to new environments will be beneficial to your company.
As a dedicated and passionate individual, I am applying for the marketing position because I believe that my skills, which I have developed through various experiences, are well-suited for this role. In my previous job, I led a team successfully to increase sales by 20%, which was a challenging task but rewarding. My ability to adapt quickly to new environments and learn fast, I think, will be beneficial to your company.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Reference Letter
Confusion with prepositions ('in', 'on', 'at')
To wWhom iIt mMay cConcern,I am writing in support of Mr. Kim's application for the position at your company. I have worked with him fonr the past three years, and I can confidently say he is one of the most dedicated employees I have met. His skills in problem-solving and leadership have been invaluable into our team, and I am sure he will be a great asset ato your organization.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some corrections for prepositional phrasing."
To Whom It May Concern , I am writing in support of Mr. Kim's application for the position at your company. I have worked with him for the past three years, and I can confidently say he is one of the most dedicated employees I have met. His skills in problem-solving and leadership have been invaluable to our team and I am sure he will be a great asset to your organization.
To whom it may concern, I am writing in support of Mr. Kim's application for the position at your company. I have worked with him on the past three years, and I can confidently say he is one of the most dedicated employees I have met. His skills in problem-solving and leadership have been invaluable in our team, and I am sure he will be a great asset at your organization.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Resume
Omitting articles ('a', 'an', 'the')
Experienced software developer witha strong background in Java and Python. Worked asa team leader in software development company for five years, managing projects and mentoring junior developers. Seeking aposition iat an innovative tech company to contribute myskills and grow professionally.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I added some missing articles and made a couple of other small changes."
Experienced software developer with a strong background in Java and Python. Worked as a team leader in software development company for five years, managing projects and mentoring junior developers. Seeking a position at an innovative tech company to contribute my skills and grow professionally.
Experienced software developer with strong background in Java and Python. Worked as team leader in software development company for five years, managing projects and mentoring junior developers. Seeking position in innovative tech company to contribute skills and grow professionally.