Common English Mistakes in Personal Statements by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Personal Statement in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using overly formal or direct language

I am writing to express myutmost interest in the position of Marketing Specialist at your esteemedcompany. I have accumulatedextensive experience in the field of marketing, and I am confident that my skills will contributesignificantly to your organization's success. I am eager to discuss how my background and qualifications align with the requirements of this role.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make it sound a bit less formal :)"

I am writing to express my interest in the position of Marketing Specialist at your company. I have accumulated experience in the field of marketing, and I am confident that my skills will contribute to your organization's success. I am eager to discuss how my background and qualifications align with the requirements of this role.

I am writing to express my utmost interest in the position of Marketing Specialist at your esteemed company. I have accumulated extensive experience in the field of marketing, and I am confident that my skills will contribute significantly to your organization's success. I am eager to discuss how my background and qualifications align with the requirements of this role.

Mistake Example #2

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Applying for this position isa great opportunity for me to grow professionally. HI have always been passionate about technology and innovation, and believe that joining your team will allow me to contribute effectively. It is important to work in an environment that encourages creativity and collaboration.

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"This is well-written. However, remember to use subjects in your sentences. For example, "Have always been" should be "I have always been" and "Is important" should be "It is important"."

Applying for this position is a great opportunity for me to grow professionally. I have always been passionate about technology and innovation, and believe that joining your team will allow me to contribute effectively. It is important to work in an environment that encourages creativity and collaboration.

Applying for this position is great opportunity for me to grow professionally. Have always been passionate about technology and innovation, and believe that joining your team will allow me to contribute effectively. Is important to work in an environment that encourages creativity and collaboration.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

I am very excited to apply for the position at your company. There isare many reasons why I believe I am a strong candidate. My experience in project management haves taught me valuable skills, and I am confident that I can contribute meaningfuchlly to your team.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I fixed some issues with singular/plural and polished up the text. Well done!"

I am very excited to apply for the position at your company. There are many reasons why I believe I am a strong candidate. My experience in project management has taught me valuable skills, and I am confident that I can contribute meaningfully to your team.

I am very excited to apply for the position at your company. There is many reasons why I believe I am a strong candidate. My experience in project management have taught me valuable skills, and I am confident that I can contribute much to your team.