Common English Mistakes in Policy Briefs by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Policy Brief in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

I am honorpleased to inform you that theesteemed Ministry of Environment is consideringthe implementation of a new policy to enhance the sustainability of water resourcesin our beloved nation. It is with great privilege that I convey tThedetails of this initiative, which aims toll address the pressingchallenges of water scarcity andhelp ensure the prosperity of future generations. IThank am deeplygratefoul for youresteemed attention to this matter. andWe look forward to your valuedfeedbackon this significant endeavor.!

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking for overuse of overly formal language."

I am pleased to inform you that the Ministry of Environment is considering a new policy to enhance the sustainability of water resources. The initiative will address the challenge of water scarcity and help ensure the prosperity of future generations. Thank you for your attention to this matter. We look forward to your feedback!

I am honored to inform you that the esteemed Ministry of Environment is considering the implementation of a new policy to enhance the sustainability of water resources in our beloved nation. It is with great privilege that I convey the details of this initiative, which aims to address the pressing challenges of water scarcity and ensure the prosperity of future generations. I am deeply grateful for your esteemed attention to this matter and look forward to your valued feedback on this significant endeavor.

Mistake Example #2

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

In recent years, Saudi Arabia has made significant strides in renewable energy, and thecountry is committed to reducing its carbon footprint. The government has launched several initiatives to support this transition, and sheit aims to increase ithes share of renewable energy in the national grid. It is crucial for policymakers to continue supporting these efforts, as heit will ensure a sustainable future for the country.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I just fixed a few issues with the pronouns. Nice job!"

In recent years, Saudi Arabia has made significant strides in renewable energy, and the country is committed to reducing its carbon footprint. The government has launched several initiatives to support this transition, and it aims to increase its share of renewable energy in the national grid. It is crucial for policymakers to continue supporting these efforts, as it will ensure a sustainable future for the country.

In recent years, Saudi Arabia has made significant strides in renewable energy, and he is committed to reducing its carbon footprint. The government has launched several initiatives to support this transition, and she aims to increase the share of renewable energy in the national grid. It is crucial for policymakers to continue supporting these efforts, as he will ensure a sustainable future for the country.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

In recent years, the government of Saudi Arabia hasimplemented new policies to enhance their educational system. It aims to increase the quality of education and provide better opportunities for students. The Ministry of Education also launched initiatives to support teachers and improve their training programs.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I made corrections to the verb tense in some of the phrases. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

In recent years, the government of Saudi Arabia has implemented new policies to enhance their educational system. It aims to increase the quality of education and provide better opportunities for students. The Ministry of Education also launched initiatives to support teachers and improve their training programs.

In recent years, the government of Saudi Arabia implement new policies to enhance the educational system. It aim to increase the quality of education and provide better opportunities for students. The Ministry of Education also launch initiatives to support teachers and improve their training programs.