Common English Mistakes by Italian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing in English.

Category:Government & Policy Writing
Writing used for policy-making and government communication.
Common Users:Government Officials, Non-profits, Public Policy Analysts.
Mistake Example #1

Government & Policy Writing / Government Memo

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

To aAll dDepartment hHeads,I Iam writeing to inform you that the meeting for thebudget review meeting hasbeen postponed to next week. We'll see yous in the conference room at 10 AM on Monday. Please confirm your presence by Friday, so we can organize the necessary materials.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to sound more native and natural, among other fixes."

To All Department Heads, I am writing to inform you that the budget review meeting has been postponed to next week. We'll see you in the conference room at 10 AM on Monday. Please confirm your presence by Friday so we can organize the necessary materials.

To all department heads, I write to inform you that the meeting for the budget review is postponed to next week. We see us in the conference room at 10 AM on Monday. Please confirm your presence by Friday, so we can organize the necessary materials.

Mistake Example #2

Government & Policy Writing / Grant Application

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

Dear Grant Committee, I am writing to apply for thefundingopportunity for our community project. We arebelieving thate this initiative will bring many benefits to the local area, and we arehopinge to receive your support. In oOur proposal, we have includeds detailed plans and abudget,. and wWe are available to discussit further if you have questions. Thank you for your consideration,. and wWe sehope to hear from yous soon.

Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA

"My revisions are to help with overall fluency and flow. "

Dear Grant Committee, I am writing to apply for funding for our community project. We believe this initiative will bring many benefits to the local area, and we hope to receive your support. Our proposal includes detailed plans and a budget. We are available to discuss it further if you have questions. Thank you for your consideration. We hope to hear from you soon.

Dear Grant Committee, I am writing to apply for the funding opportunity for our community project. We are believing that this initiative will bring many benefits to the local area, and we are hoping to receive your support. In our proposal, we have included detailed plans and budget, and we are available to discuss further if you have questions. Thank you for your consideration, and we see us soon.

Mistake Example #3

Government & Policy Writing / Legislative Report

Overuse of passive voice

The legislative report was drafted to address the recent changes in environmental policy. It was noted that the new regulations were implemented to reduce carbon emissions. The impact on local industries was analyzed, and it wasI concluded that further adjustments were needed. The fFeedback from stakeholders was collected, and it wasI suggested that additional consultations shouldbe organized.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Just a few minor tweaks to make the report less passive :) Nice work! "

The legislative report was drafted to address the recent changes in environmental policy. I noted that the new regulations were implemented to reduce carbon emissions. The impact on local industries was analyzed, and I concluded that further adjustments were needed. Feedback from stakeholders was collected, and I suggested that additional consultations be organized.

The legislative report was drafted to address the recent changes in environmental policy. It was noted that the new regulations were implemented to reduce carbon emissions. The impact on local industries was analyzed, and it was concluded that further adjustments were needed. The feedback from stakeholders was collected, and it was suggested that additional consultations should be organized.

Mistake Example #4

Government & Policy Writing / Official Statement

Confusing singular and plural nouns

The Ministry of Environment announced a new initiative to protect theforests acthrossughout the country. This effort aims to increase the number of trees planted and reduce pollution levels in urban areas. We believe that these actions will contribute to a healthier ecosystem and benefit future generations.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the singular nouns and verbs to plural. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

The Ministry of Environment announced a new initiative to protect forests throughout the country. This effort aims to increase the number of trees planted and reduce pollution levels in urban areas. We believe that these actions will contribute to a healthier ecosystem and benefit future generations.

The Ministry of Environment announce new initiative to protect the forest across the country. This effort aim to increase the number of tree planted and reduce pollution level in urban area. We believe that these action will contribute to a healthier ecosystem and benefit future generation.

Mistake Example #5

Government & Policy Writing / Policy Brief

Confusing singular and plural nouns

The recent policy brief on climate change initiative highlights the importance of reducing carbon emissions in urban areas. It is crucial that thegovernment implements measures to support renewable energy sources and promote sustainable practices among citizens. The collaboration between local authorityies and international organizations areis essential to achieve these goals effectively.

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"Please remember to use plural nouns properly. For example. "highlight" should be "highlights" and "carbon emission in urban area" should be "carbon emissions in urban areas"."

The recent policy brief on climate change initiative highlights the importance of reducing carbon emissions in urban areas. It is crucial that the government implements measures to support renewable energy sources and promote sustainable practices among citizens. The collaboration between local authorities and international organizations is essential to achieve these goals effectively.

The recent policy brief on climate change initiative highlight the importance of reducing carbon emission in urban area. It is crucial that government implement measure to support renewable energy source and promote sustainable practice among citizen. The collaboration between local authority and international organization are essential to achieve these goal effectively.

Mistake Example #6

Government & Policy Writing / Public Notice

Overuse of passive voice

NoticWeis hereby givenotice that the park will be closed for maintenance on Saturday. It is requested that aAll visitors armust be informed of this closure in advance. The necessary repairs are being conmaducted to ensure safety and improvements are made for the enjoyment of all. Your cooperation is appreciated, and we regretany inconvenience causedis regretted.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Changes I made were mostly to make the writing more active and less passive. Nicely done :) "

We hereby give notice that the park will be closed for maintenance on Saturday. All visitors must be informed of this closure in advance. The necessary repairs are being made to ensure safety and improvements are made for the enjoyment of all. Your cooperation is appreciated, and we regret any inconvenience caused.

Notice is hereby given that the park will be closed for maintenance on Saturday. It is requested that all visitors are informed of this closure in advance. The necessary repairs are being conducted to ensure safety and improvements are made for the enjoyment of all. Your cooperation is appreciated, and any inconvenience caused is regretted.