This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing in English.
Academic Writing / Academic Journal Article
Overuse of passive voice
In rRecent studies, it was obsrervedal significanthat the effects of climate change on Mediterranean ecosystems. Researe significant. Thedata weres collected dataover afive-year period of five years,andit was analyzedit using advanced statistical methods. It isThey believed that the results will contribuhelp deteto thrmine undehow global warstandming ofis howimpacting these ecosystemsare being impacted by global warming.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to reduce the use of passive voice."
Recent studies reveal significant effects of climate change on Mediterranean ecosystems. Researchers collected data over a five-year period and analyzed it using advanced statistical methods. They believe the results will help determine how global warming is impacting these ecosystems.
In recent studies, it was observed that the effects of climate change on Mediterranean ecosystems are significant. The data were collected over a period of five years, and it was analyzed using advanced statistical methods. It is believed that the results will contribute to the understanding of how these ecosystems are being impacted by global warming.
Business Writing / Annual Report
Overuse of passive voice
In the fiscal year 2023, the company achievedsignificant growth was achievend byenthecompany, anred new marketswere entered. The expansion strategy was implemented successfully, and several partnerships were established with key industry players. It is expected that fFurther improvements will bare sexpencted in the next quarter, and customer satisfaction will be increased through enhanced service offerings.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Nice work! I just changed some of the passive voice constructions to the active voice to enhance readability."
In the fiscal year 2023, the company achieved significant growth and entered new markets. The expansion strategy was implemented successfully, and several partnerships were established with key industry players. Further improvements are expected in the next quarter, and customer satisfaction will be increased through enhanced service offerings.
In the fiscal year 2023, significant growth was achieved by the company, and new markets were entered. The expansion strategy was implemented successfully, and several partnerships were established with key industry players. It is expected that further improvements will be seen in the next quarter, and customer satisfaction will be increased through enhanced service offerings.
Educational & Instructional Writing / E-learning Module
Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')
Welcome to the E-learning Module on English Grammar Basics. Today, we will learn about the use of articles in sentences. In Italian, we say "The cat is on table," but in English, it is important to include the article "the" before "table." We'll see yous tomorrow for the next lesson, where we willandiscuss more about verb tenses.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaks for a more natural and native sound."
Welcome to the E-learning Module on English Grammar Basics. Today, we will learn about the use of articles in sentences. In Italian, we say "The cat is on table," but in English, it is important to include the article "the" before "table." We'll see you tomorrow for the next lesson and more about verb tenses.
Welcome to the E-learning Module on English Grammar Basics. Today, we will learn about the use of articles in sentences. In Italian, we say "The cat is on table," but in English, it is important to include the article "the" before "table." We see us tomorrow for the next lesson, where we will discuss more about verb tenses.
ESL Writing / Email Practice
Overuse of passive voice
Dear Maria,it isI informedyou that the meeting wais postponed untoil next week. The agenda was discussed, and the meetitng wamembers decided that more time is needed for preparation. Your feedback is appreciated, and it isI hoped that you will be able to attend the rescheduled meeting. Thank you for your understanding.
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Vince, United States
"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and reduce passive writing. Good job! "
Dear Maria, I inform you that the meeting is postponed until next week. The agenda was discussed, and the meeting members decided that more time is needed for preparation. Your feedback is appreciated, and I hope you will be able to attend the rescheduled meeting. Thank you for your understanding.
Dear Maria, it is informed that the meeting was postponed to next week. The agenda was discussed, and it was decided that more time is needed for preparation. Your feedback is appreciated, and it is hoped that you will be able to attend the rescheduled meeting. Thank you for your understanding.
Fiction & Creative Writing / Creative Nonfiction
Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')
In the warm embrace of the Tuscan sun, I find myself lost in the memories of my childhood summers. We were always playing in the fields, and the laughter of my friends still echoes in my mind. "We'll see yous tomorrow," they would say, as we parted ways, promising another day of adventures under the endless sky.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to sound more natural and native."
In the warm embrace of the Tuscan sun, I find myself lost in the memories of my childhood summers. We were always playing in the fields, and the laughter of my friends still echoes in my mind. "We'll see you tomorrow," they would say, as we parted ways, promising another day of adventures under the endless sky.
In the warm embrace of the Tuscan sun, I find myself lost in the memories of my childhood summers. We were always playing in the fields, and the laughter of my friends still echoes in my mind. We see us tomorrow, they would say, as we parted ways, promising another day of adventures under the endless sky.
Government & Policy Writing / Government Memo
Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')
To aAll dDepartment hHeads,I Iam writeing to inform you that the meeting for thebudget review meeting hasbeen postponed to next week. We'll see yous in the conference room at 10 AM on Monday. Please confirm your presence by Friday, so we can organize the necessary materials.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to sound more native and natural, among other fixes."
To All Department Heads, I am writing to inform you that the budget review meeting has been postponed to next week. We'll see you in the conference room at 10 AM on Monday. Please confirm your presence by Friday so we can organize the necessary materials.
To all department heads, I write to inform you that the meeting for the budget review is postponed to next week. We see us in the conference room at 10 AM on Monday. Please confirm your presence by Friday, so we can organize the necessary materials.
Healthcare & Medical Writing / Clinical Study
Confusing singular and plural nouns
The clinical study aims to evaluate the effectiveness of anew drug in treating patients with chronic pain conditions. Participants were recruited from various hospitals across Italy, and each participant received a daily dose of the medication for a period of six weeks. The results indicate that there is significant improvement in pain levels among the patients who completed the study.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I fixed some issues with singular vs. plural nouns and made a couple of other small changes. Nice job!"
The clinical study aims to evaluate the effectiveness of a new drug in treating patients with chronic pain conditions. Participants were recruited from various hospitals across Italy, and each participant received a daily dose of the medication for a period of six weeks. The results indicate that there is significant improvement in pain levels among the patients who completed the study.
The clinical study aim to evaluate the effectiveness of new drug in treating patient with chronic pain condition. Participant were recruited from various hospital across Italy, and each participant receive a daily dose of the medication for a period of six week. The result indicate that there is significant improvement in pain level among the patient who completed the study.
Job Applications & Professional Development / Career Portfolio
Confusing singular and plural nouns
As part of my career portfolio, I have included several projects that highlight my skills in management and leadership. Each projects demonstrates my ability to coordinatea team and achieve goals efficiently. I believe these experiences make me a strong candidate for the position you are offering.
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Vince, United States
"Overall your writing was very professional; it just needed a few tweaks to make things consistent. Good job! "
As part of my career portfolio, I have included several projects that highlight my skills in management and leadership. Each project demonstrates my ability to coordinate a team and achieve goals efficiently. I believe these experiences make me a strong candidate for the position you are offering.
As part of my career portfolio, I have included several project that highlight my skills in management and leadership. Each projects demonstrate my ability to coordinate team and achieve goals efficiently. I believe these experience make me a strong candidate for the position you are offering.
Journalism & Media / Editorial
Overuse of passive voice
In recent years, it has been observed thatclimate change ihas beieng increasingly discussed inthe media. The effects of global warming are being felt across the world, and urgent actions are being demanded by environmental groups. However, it ismany believed by many thatnot enough is being done by governmentsare not doing enough to address the crisis. It is hoped that more attention will be given to this issue in the coming years.
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I changed some of the sentences from the passive voice to the active voice. Overall, these ideas are clearly expressed."
In recent years, climate change has been increasingly discussed in the media. The effects of global warming are being felt across the world, and urgent actions are being demanded by environmental groups. However, many believe that governments are not doing enough to address the crisis. It is hoped that more attention will be given to this issue in the coming years.
In recent years, it has been observed that climate change is being increasingly discussed in media. The effects of global warming are being felt across the world, and urgent actions are being demanded by environmental groups. However, it is believed by many that not enough is being done by governments to address the crisis. It is hoped that more attention will be given to this issue in the coming years.
Legal & Formal Writing / Agreement
Confusing singular and plural nouns
This Agreement is made between the Company and the Employee for the purpose of outlining the terms and conditions of employment. The Employee agrees to perform dutyies as assigned by the Company and adhere to the policyies and procedures. Both partyies understand that any breach of this Agreement may result in atermination of employment.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Well done! I just changed some singular nouns to plural."
This Agreement is made between the Company and the Employee for the purpose of outlining the terms and conditions of employment. The Employee agrees to perform duties as assigned by the Company and adhere to the policies and procedures. Both parties understand that any breach of this Agreement may result in a termination of employment.
This Agreement is made between the Company and the Employee for the purpose of outlining the term and condition of employment. The Employee agree to perform duty as assigned by the Company and adhere to the policy and procedure. Both party understand that any breach of this Agreement may result in termination of employment.
Marketing & Advertising Writing / Ad Copy
Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')
Discover the new taste of Italy with our pasta sauces! We bring toyou the authentic flavors that make you feel like youa're in the heart of Rome. Buy now and bring home the tradition,—because with our sauces, you eat well and youstay well!
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability. "
Discover the new taste of Italy with our pasta sauces! We bring you the authentic flavors that make you feel like you're in the heart of Rome. Buy now and bring home the tradition—because with our sauces, you eat well and stay well!
Discover the new taste of Italy with our pasta sauces! We bring to you the authentic flavors that make you feel like you are in the heart of Rome. Buy now and bring home the tradition, because with our sauces, you eat well and you stay well!
Personal & Lifestyle Writing / Journal Entry
Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')
Today was a very beautiful day. I went to the park with my friends, and we mhade a picnic uinder the sun. We ate many delicious foods and talked about our plans for the summer. Afterthat, we decided to take a walk around the lake, and we saw many ducks swimming. It was so relaxing, and I felt very happy. We willsee useach other tomorrow for another adventure!
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I just replaced a word or two to make the English sound more natural. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."
Today was a very beautiful day. I went to the park with my friends, and we had a picnic in the sun. We ate many delicious foods and talked about our plans for the summer. After that, we decided to take a walk around the lake, and we saw many ducks swimming. It was so relaxing, and I felt very happy. We will see each other tomorrow for another adventure!
Today was a very beautiful day. I went to the park with my friends, and we made a picnic under the sun. We ate many delicious foods and talked about our plans for the summer. After, we decided to take a walk around the lake, and we saw many ducks swimming. It was so relaxing, and I felt very happy. We see us tomorrow for another adventure!
Social Media & Online Writing / Blog Post
Overuse of passive voice
In tToday's blog post, it is discusseds how the beautiful landscapes of Italy are admired by tourists from all over the world. The stunning coastlines and historic cities are often photographed and shared on social media, where they are appreciated by many. It is believed that Ithealy's charmof Italy is enhanced by its rich culture and delicious cuisine, which are enjoyed by visitors and locals alike.
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I changed some instances of the passive voice to active voice to improve fluidity and make the English sound more natural."
Today's blog post discusses how the beautiful landscapes of Italy are admired by tourists from all over the world. The stunning coastlines and historic cities are often photographed and shared on social media, where they are appreciated by many. It is believed that Italy's charm is enhanced by its rich culture and delicious cuisine, which are enjoyed by visitors and locals alike.
In today's blog post, it is discussed how the beautiful landscapes of Italy are admired by tourists from all over the world. The stunning coastlines and historic cities are often photographed and shared on social media, where they are appreciated by many. It is believed that the charm of Italy is enhanced by its rich culture and delicious cuisine, which are enjoyed by visitors and locals alike.
Student / Admission Essay
Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')
I am very excited to apply for the Master's program inat your university. SiFrom a youncg ageI was child, Iha've always hadbeen passionate faborut engineering, and I believe thatyour curriculum offers the ideal foursendation willto help meto achieve my dprofessionaml goals.We see us in the next semester, and I am eager to startbegin this excitingnew chapter andvlook forward to joining you nenxtusemestere.
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Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"I made changes for it to sound a bit more natural and native, and also for general readability and flow."
I am very excited to apply for the Master's program at your university. From a young age, I've been passionate about engineering, and I believe your curriculum offers the ideal foundation to help me achieve my professional goals. I am eager to begin this exciting new chapter and look forward to joining you next semester.
I am very excited to apply for the Master program in your university. Since I was child, I have always had passion for engineering, and I believe that your course will help me to achieve my dreams. We see us in the next semester, and I am eager to start this new adventure.
Technical & Scientific Writing / Engineering Specification
Overuse of passive voice
The new hydraulic system is designed to improve efficiency in the production line. TWe assembled the componentsare assembled with precision to ensure optimal performance. It is recommended that rRegular maintenance checks are prerfcormmended to prevent any potential issues. The system's specifications are outlined in the attached document, and it is advised thatall guidelines arshould be followed closely.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"I changed some of the passive voice sentences to the active voice and made a few other stylistic changes. "
The new hydraulic system is designed to improve efficiency in the production line. We assembled the components with precision to ensure optimal performance. Regular maintenance checks are recommended to prevent any potential issues. The system's specifications are outlined in the attached document, and all guidelines should be followed closely.
The new hydraulic system is designed to improve efficiency in the production line. The components are assembled with precision to ensure optimal performance. It is recommended that regular maintenance checks are performed to prevent any potential issues. The system's specifications are outlined in the attached document, and it is advised that all guidelines are followed closely.