Common English Mistakes in Personal Essays by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Personal Essay in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Growing up in Taiwan,I was always fascinated by the vibrant night markets and thebustling streets. It's a place where tradition meets modernity, and every corner tells a story. RI remember visiting the old temple with my grandmother, andshe would tell me tales of the past. It's important to cherish these memories, as—they shape who we are today.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"A subject needed to be added in several sentences."

Growing up in Taiwan, I was always fascinated by the vibrant night markets and bustling streets. It's a place where tradition meets modernity, and every corner tells a story. I remember visiting the old temple with my grandmother, and she would tell me tales of the past. It's important to cherish these memories—they shape who we are today.

Growing up in Taiwan, always fascinated by the vibrant night markets and the bustling streets. Is a place where tradition meets modernity, and every corner tells a story. Remember visiting the old temple with my grandmother, she would tell me tales of the past. Is important to cherish these memories, as they shape who we are today.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

When I first arrived at the night market in Taipei, there was so manyuch excitement in the air. There are somuchany people enjoying the delicious street foods and vibrant atmosphere. I felt a sense of belonging among the crowd, even though I was just one of the many faces in the sea of happiness.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking for proper usage of singular vs. plural nouns."

When I first arrived at the night market in Taipei, there was so much excitement in the air. There are so many people enjoying the delicious street foods and vibrant atmosphere. I felt a sense of belonging among the crowd, even though I was just one of the many faces in the sea of happiness.

When I first arrived at the night market in Taipei, there was so many excitement in the air. There are much people enjoying the delicious street foods and vibrant atmosphere. I felt a sense of belonging among the crowd, even though I was just one of the many faces in the sea of happiness.

Mistake Example #3

Using overly formal or direct language

In my life, I have encountered numerous challenges that have shaped my character significantly. It is my firm belief that overcoming these obstacles has made me a stronger individual. I must express my gratitude to my family, who have provided unwavering support and guidance throughout my journey.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"It doesn't sound too formal or direct for this context."

In my life, I have encountered numerous challenges that have shaped my character significantly. It is my firm belief that overcoming these obstacles has made me a stronger individual. I must express my gratitude to my family, who have provided unwavering support and guidance throughout my journey.

In my life, I have encountered numerous challenges that have shaped my character significantly. It is my firm belief that overcoming these obstacles has made me a stronger individual. I must express my gratitude to my family, who have provided unwavering support and guidance throughout my journey.