Common English Mistakes in White Papers by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a White Paper in English.

Mistake Example #1

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

In thea recent study on renewable energy technologies, theresearch team highlights the significant advancements in solar panel efficiency. She emphasizes that the new models are capable of converting sunlight into electricity wiath a higher rate than previous versions. The research team, led by Dr. Ahmed, has dedicated their efforts to ensure that the findings contribute to the global push for sustainable energy solutions.

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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Good job overall, but it is unclear whether Dr. Ahmed is male or female because you used both masculine and feminine pronouns."

In a recent study on renewable energy technologies, the research team highlights the significant advancements in solar panel efficiency. She emphasizes that the new models are capable of converting sunlight into electricity at a higher rate than previous versions. The research team, led by Dr. Ahmed, has dedicated their efforts to ensure that the findings contribute to the global push for sustainable energy solutions.

In the recent study on renewable energy technologies, he highlights the significant advancements in solar panel efficiency. She emphasizes that the new models are capable of converting sunlight into electricity with a higher rate than previous versions. The research team, led by Dr. Ahmed, has dedicated their efforts to ensure that he findings contribute to the global push for sustainable energy solutions.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

In the esteemed realm of scientific exploration, I am honored to inform you that oOur recent study on renewable energy sources has yielded results ofsignificant importance. It is with great pleasure that I presenultto you the findings, which. I am confidentour findings will contribute to the advancement of sustainable technologies in Saudi Arabia. I am privileged to assure you that oOur team is committed to furthering this researchwith utmost dedication and diligence.

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Camille, Maryland, USA

"I have toned down the use of formal expressions. Using too many can dilute your message."

Our recent study on renewable energy sources has yielded significant results. I am confident our findings will contribute to the advancement of sustainable technologies in Saudi Arabia. Our team is committed to furthering this research.

In the esteemed realm of scientific exploration, I am honored to inform you that our recent study on renewable energy sources has yielded results of significant importance. It is with great pleasure that I present to you the findings, which I am confident will contribute to the advancement of sustainable technologies in Saudi Arabia. I am privileged to assure you that our team is committed to furthering this research with utmost dedication and diligence.