Common English Mistakes in Legislative Reports by Italian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing a Legislative Report in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of passive voice

The legislative report was drafted to address the recent changes in environmental policy. It was noted that the new regulations were implemented to reduce carbon emissions. The impact on local industries was analyzed, and it wasI concluded that further adjustments were needed. The fFeedback from stakeholders was collected, and it wasI suggested that additional consultations shouldbe organized.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Just a few minor tweaks to make the report less passive :) Nice work! "

The legislative report was drafted to address the recent changes in environmental policy. I noted that the new regulations were implemented to reduce carbon emissions. The impact on local industries was analyzed, and I concluded that further adjustments were needed. Feedback from stakeholders was collected, and I suggested that additional consultations be organized.

The legislative report was drafted to address the recent changes in environmental policy. It was noted that the new regulations were implemented to reduce carbon emissions. The impact on local industries was analyzed, and it was concluded that further adjustments were needed. The feedback from stakeholders was collected, and it was suggested that additional consultations should be organized.

Mistake Example #2

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

The legislative committee has discussed the proposal for the new environmental law, and we have decided to move forward with the amendments. It is important that we take into consideration the feedback from the local communities, as they have expressed concerns about the impact on their daily lives. We willsee yous in the next session to finalize the details and ensure that all voices are heard in this important matter.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the phrasing to make the English grammatically correct and natural-sounding."

The legislative committee has discussed the proposal for the new environmental law, and we have decided to move forward with the amendments. It is important that we take into consideration the feedback from the local communities, as they have expressed concerns about the impact on their daily lives. We will see you in the next session to finalize the details and ensure that all voices are heard in this important matter.

The legislative committee has discussed the proposal for the new environmental law, and we have decided to move forward with the amendments. It is important that we take in consideration the feedback from the local communities, as they have expressed concerns about the impact on their daily lives. We see us in the next session to finalize the details and ensure that all voices are heard in this important matter.

Mistake Example #3

Confusing singular and plural nouns

The legislative report highlights the need fora new policy regardingthe environmental protections in our country. The committee haves reviewed the proposal and suggested several amendments to the current law. It is crucial that each department implement these changes to ensure the sustainability of our natural resources.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to correct misuse of singular/plural nouns."

The legislative report highlights the need for a new policy regarding environmental protections in our country. The committee has reviewed the proposal and suggested several amendments to the current law. It is crucial that each department implement these changes to ensure the sustainability of our natural resources.

The legislative report highlight the need for new policy regarding the environmental protection in our country. The committee have reviewed the proposal and suggest several amendment to the current law. It is crucial that each department implement these change to ensure the sustainability of our natural resource.