Common English Mistakes in Personal Statements by Ukrainian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Ukrainian speakers from Ukraine when writing a Personal Statement in English.

Mistake Example #1

Skipping articles ('I bought car' instead of 'I bought a car')

I am writing to express my interest inthe position of software developer at your company. I havea degree in computer science from Kyiv National University and have worked inthe IT industry for over five years. My experience includes developing applications and collaborating with teams to deliver high-quality software solutions.

Text corrected by:
Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"This is a fairly good write-up overall. However, don't forget to use articles in your sentences. For example, "my interest in position of software developer" should be "my interest in the position of software developer". "I have degree in computer science" should be " I have a degree in computer science". "

I am writing to express my interest in the position of software developer at your company. I have a degree in computer science from Kyiv National University and have worked in the IT industry for over five years. My experience includes developing applications and collaborating with teams to deliver high-quality software solutions.

I am writing to express my interest in position of software developer at your company. I have degree in computer science from Kyiv National University and have worked in IT industry for over five years. My experience includes developing applications and collaborating with team to deliver high-quality software solutions.

Mistake Example #2

Confusion with word order ('Always I go to the store' instead of 'I always go to the store')

I am writing to express my interest in the marketing position at your company. AlwaysI havealways been passionate about creative strategies and innovative solutions. In my previous role, IsuccessfullyI led a team to increase brand awareness by 30% within a year.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Great job! I just needed to move a couple of words."

I am writing to express my interest in the marketing position at your company. I have always been passionate about creative strategies and innovative solutions. In my previous role, I successfully led a team to increase brand awareness by 30% within a year.

I am writing to express my interest in the marketing position at your company. Always I have been passionate about creative strategies and innovative solutions. In my previous role, successfully I led a team to increase brand awareness by 30% within a year.

Mistake Example #3

Using 'will' incorrectly in conditionals ('If it will rain, I will stay' instead of 'If it rains, I will stay')

As a dedicated and passionate software developer, I am eager to contribute to your team. If I will ghavet the opportunity to work at your company, I will bring my strong problem-solving skills and innovative ideaswith me. Ibelieve that if I will beam given the chance, I will make a significant impact on your projects.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking for correct word usage in conditionals."

As a dedicated and passionate software developer, I am eager to contribute to your team. If I have the opportunity to work at your company, I will bring my strong problem-solving skills and innovative ideas with me. If I am given the chance, I will make a significant impact on your projects.

As a dedicated and passionate software developer, I am eager to contribute to your team. If I will get the opportunity to work at your company, I will bring my strong problem-solving skills and innovative ideas. I believe that if I will be given the chance, I will make a significant impact on your projects.