This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing in English.
| Category: | Student Personal writing used for admissions and transfer letters. |
| Common Users: | Students of various disciplines. |
Student / Admission Essay
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
As a young student from Saudi Arabia, I havealways dreamed tof studying at your prestigious university. Since I wams a child, I havehad a strong passion for engineering and technology. I believe that studying inat your institution will help me achieve my goals and contribute to the development of my country.
Text corrected by:
Vince, United States
"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability. Nicely done :)"
As a young student from Saudi Arabia, I have always dreamed of studying at your prestigious university. Since I was a child, I have had a strong passion for engineering and technology. I believe that studying at your institution will help me achieve my goals and contribute to the development of my country.
As a young student from Saudi Arabia, I always dream to study at your prestigious university. Since I am a child, I have a strong passion for engineering and technology. I believe that studying in your institution will help me achieve my goals and contribute to the development of my country.
Student / Personal Statement
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
I am very excited to apply ftor the Mmaster's program in Ccomputer Sscience at your esteemed university. Since I wams a child, I havehad a passion for technology and innovation. I believe that studying in your program will help me achieve my dreams and contribute to the field of technology in Saudi Arabia.
Text corrected by:
Vince, United States
"Just a few small changes were needed. Great work! "
I am very excited to apply to the master's program in computer science at your esteemed university. Since I was a child, I have had a passion for technology and innovation. I believe that studying in your program will help me achieve my dreams and contribute to the field of technology in Saudi Arabia.
I am very excited to apply for the Master's program in Computer Science at your esteemed university. Since I am a child, I have a passion for technology and innovation. I believe that studying in your program will help me achieve my dreams and contribute to the field of technology in Saudi Arabia.
Student / Transfer Essay
Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns
I am writing this essay to explain why I want to transfer to your university. My brother is currently studying there, and she has told me many great things about the programs and thecampus life. I believe that heris experience will help me adjust quickly and make the most of my time at your institution.
Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some corrections for the proper use of masculine pronouns."
I am writing this essay to explain why I want to transfer to your university. My brother is currently studying there, and he has told me many great things about the programs and campus life. I believe his experience will help me adjust quickly and make the most of my time at your institution.
I am writing this essay to explain why I want to transfer to your university. My brother is currently studying there, and she has told me many great things about the programs and the campus life. I believe that her experience will help me adjust quickly and make the most of my time at your institution.