This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Patient Information Leaflet in English.
Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')
Dear Patient, I am honored to inform you that tThis leaflet containsthe most esteemed information regarding your medication. It is with great respect that I advise yYou musto take the medicine twice daily, as it is of utmost importance for your health. Please be assured that fFollowing these instructions will bimpringove your healthe highest level of well-being and satisfaction.
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Camille, Maryland, USA
"I have removed some of the formal expressions to make the English sound more natural to native speakers."
Dear Patient, This leaflet contains information regarding your medication. You must take the medicine twice daily. Following these instructions will improve your health.
Dear Patient, I am honored to inform you that this leaflet contains the most esteemed information regarding your medication. It is with great respect that I advise you to take the medicine twice daily, as it is of utmost importance for your health. Please be assured that following these instructions will bring you the highest level of well-being and satisfaction.
Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')
This medicine helps you to reduce pain and inflammation. You take one tablet every six hours with water. If you feel dizzy or nauseous, you should stop takeing the medicine and consult your doctor immediately.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Nice work! I just needed to make a few adjustments to the verb tense."
This medicine helps you to reduce pain and inflammation. You take one tablet every six hours with water. If you feel dizzy or nauseous, you should stop taking the medicine and consult your doctor immediately.
This medicine help you to reduce pain and inflammation. You take one tablet every six hours with water. If you feel dizzy or nauseous, you should stop take the medicine and consult your doctor immediately.
Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns
This leaflet itells to informhe patient about how to take his medication correctly. He should take the pill with water and ensure she does not skip any doses. If he experiences any side effects, she should contact his doctor immediately.
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Vince, United States
"Very good! Just a couple of changes to make pronouns consistent and improve flow. "
This leaflet tells the patient how to take his medication correctly. He should take the pill with water and ensure he does not skip any doses. If he experiences any side effects, he should contact his doctor immediately.
This leaflet is to inform patient about how to take his medication correctly. He should take the pill with water and ensure she does not skip any doses. If he experiences any side effects, she should contact his doctor immediately.