Common English Mistakes in Bio Pagess by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing a Bio Pages in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of passive voice

My name is Ahmed Al Mansoori, and I am a marketing specialist with over ten years of experience. AI obtained a degree in Bbusiness Aadministrationwas obtained from the University of Dubai, and have managed numerous successful campaignswere managed for leading companies in the region. My skills in strategic planning and digital marketing have been recognized by industry leaders, and I have receivedseveral awardswere received for innovative approaches in advertising.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Just a few minor tweaks to reduce the use of passive voice :) Nice work! "

My name is Ahmed Al Mansoori, and I am a marketing specialist with over ten years of experience. I obtained a degree in business administration from the University of Dubai and have managed numerous successful campaigns for leading companies in the region. My skills in strategic planning and digital marketing have been recognized by industry leaders, and I have received several awards for innovative approaches in advertising.

My name is Ahmed Al Mansoori, and I am a marketing specialist with over ten years of experience. A degree in Business Administration was obtained from the University of Dubai, and numerous successful campaigns were managed for leading companies in the region. My skills in strategic planning and digital marketing have been recognized by industry leaders, and several awards were received for innovative approaches in advertising.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')

My name is Ahmed Al Mansoori, and I am working as aproject manager ata leading construction company in Dubai. I have experiencein managing large-scale projects and I am passionate about building asustainable future. In my free time, I enjoy reading books and exploring new technologies.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to add missing articles ("the," "an," etc.)."

My name is Ahmed Al Mansoori, and I am working as a project manager at a leading construction company in Dubai. I have experience managing large-scale projects and I am passionate about building a sustainable future. In my free time, I enjoy reading books and exploring new technologies.

My name is Ahmed Al Mansoori, and I am working as project manager at leading construction company in Dubai. I have experience in managing large-scale projects and I am passionate about building sustainable future. In my free time, I enjoy reading book and exploring new technologies.