Common English Mistakes in News Articles by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a News Article in English.

Mistake Example #1

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

In a recent development, the Saudi Arabian government announced that heit will be implementing new policies to boost the tourism sector. The minister of tourism stated that she is confident these changes will attract more visitors to the kingdom. He emphasized the importance of showcasing Saudi Arabia's rich cultural heritage and natural beauty to the world.

Text corrected by:
Camille, Maryland, USA

"Nice job overall! Be careful about the proper use of pronouns. Here I assume the minister is a man; masculine pronouns should be used."

In a recent development, the Saudi Arabian government announced that it will be implementing new policies to boost the tourism sector. The minister of tourism stated that he is confident these changes will attract more visitors to the kingdom. He emphasized the importance of showcasing Saudi Arabia's rich cultural heritage and natural beauty to the world.

In a recent development, the Saudi Arabian government announced that he will be implementing new policies to boost the tourism sector. The minister of tourism stated that she is confident these changes will attract more visitors to the kingdom. He emphasized the importance of showcasing Saudi Arabia's rich cultural heritage and natural beauty to the world.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

In the esteemed city of Riyadh,I am honored to inform you thabout a significant eventhas taken place, which is of utmost importance to the citizensof Riyadh. The government has announced, with great pleasure, the initiation of a new public transportation system that will, without a doubt, enhance the quality of life for all residents. ItWe is with gareatvery prioude that weo share this development, as it marks a monumental step forward in the infrastructure of our belovednation.

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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I made the language sound more straightforward while still maintaining a formal tone."

I am honored to inform you about a significant event of utmost importance to the citizens of Riyadh. The government has announced the initiation of a new public transportation system that will enhance the quality of life for all residents. We are very proud to share this development, as it marks a monumental step forward in the infrastructure of our nation.

In the esteemed city of Riyadh, I am honored to inform you that a significant event has taken place, which is of utmost importance to the citizens. The government has announced, with great pleasure, the initiation of a new public transportation system that will, without a doubt, enhance the quality of life for all residents. It is with great pride that we share this development, as it marks a monumental step forward in the infrastructure of our beloved nation.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

In Riyadh yesterday, a large crowd gathered to witness the opening of the new cultural center. The event attracted many local officials and residents who expressed their excitement about the opportunities it will bring. The mayor sayid that this center will help to promote cultural exchange and understanding among different communities in the city.

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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Very nice! I just made some changes to the verb tense."

In Riyadh yesterday, a large crowd gathered to witness the opening of the new cultural center. The event attracted many local officials and residents who expressed their excitement about the opportunities it will bring. The mayor said that this center will help to promote cultural exchange and understanding among different communities in the city.

In Riyadh yesterday, a large crowd gather to witness the opening of the new cultural center. The event attract many local officials and residents who express excitement about the opportunities it will bring. The mayor say that this center will help to promote cultural exchange and understanding among different communities in the city.