Common English Mistakes in Proposals by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Proposal in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

Dear Team, I propose we launcha new product line in thenext quarter. There isare many opportunityies inthe market for our innovative solutions. We believe this will bring much success to thecompany and increase our market share significantly.

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Vince, United States

"Overall your writing was very professional; it just needed a few tweaks to be consistent. Good job!"

Dear Team, I propose we launch a new product line in the next quarter. There are many opportunities in the market for our innovative solutions. We believe this will bring much success to the company and increase our market share significantly.

Dear Team, I propose we launch new product line in next quarter. There is many opportunity in market for our innovative solutions. We believe this will bring much success to company and increase our market share significantly.

Mistake Example #2

Using overly formal or direct language

EsteemedCommittee Members, I am writing to propose the immediate implementation of our new marketing strategy. It is imperativWe needthat weo commence this project without delay to ensure maximum efficiency and success. I astrongly urgek you to approve this proposal at your earliest convenience, as it will greatlybenefit our company's futureendeavors.

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Vince, United States

"Just a few minor tweaks to reduce the overly direct language used :) Nice work! "

Committee Members, I am writing to propose the immediate implementation of our new marketing strategy. We need to commence this project without delay to ensure maximum efficiency and success. I ask you to approve this proposal at your earliest convenience, as it will benefit our company's future.

Esteemed Committee Members, I am writing to propose the immediate implementation of our new marketing strategy. It is imperative that we commence this project without delay to ensure maximum efficiency and success. I strongly urge you to approve this proposal at your earliest convenience, as it will greatly benefit our company's future endeavors.

Mistake Example #3

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

Proposal for New Marketing Strategy It is crucial to expand our brand presence in the international market. BI believe that focusing on digital platforms will increase our visibility and attract more customers. SI suggest implementing targeted social media campaigns to reach younger audiences. HI hope to discuss this proposal further in the upcoming meeting.

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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe

"I made edits to correct the omission of subjects in the sentences. For example: "Is crucial" to "It is crucial" and "Believe that" to "I believe that"."

Proposal for New Marketing Strategy It is crucial to expand our brand presence in the international market. I believe that focusing on digital platforms will increase our visibility and attract more customers. I suggest implementing targeted social media campaigns to reach younger audiences. I hope to discuss this proposal further in the upcoming meeting.

Proposal for New Marketing Strategy Is crucial to expand our brand presence in the international market. Believe that focusing on digital platforms will increase our visibility and attract more customers. Suggest implementing targeted social media campaigns to reach younger audiences. Hope to discuss this proposal further in the upcoming meeting.