Common English Mistakes in Career Portfolios by Mandarin Chinese Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Mandarin Chinese speakers from Taiwan when writing a Career Portfolio in English.

Mistake Example #1

Omitting the subject in sentences ('Is important to learn English' instead of 'It is important to learn English')

As a dedicated professional in the field of digital marketing, Ihave developed strong skills in SEO and content creation. It is crucialfor me to stay updated withon the latest trends, soI regularly attend workshops and webinars. BI believe that teamwork and communication are key to success, which is why Ialways strive to collaborate effectively with mycolleagues.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"I added the subject in places where it was missing and made a few additional changes."

As a dedicated professional in the field of digital marketing, I have developed strong skills in SEO and content creation. It is crucial for me to stay updated on the latest trends, so I regularly attend workshops and webinars. I believe that teamwork and communication are key to success, which is why I always strive to collaborate effectively with my colleagues.

As a dedicated professional in the field of digital marketing, have developed strong skills in SEO and content creation. Is crucial to stay updated with the latest trends, so regularly attend workshops and webinars. Believe that teamwork and communication are key to success, which is why always strive to collaborate effectively with colleagues.

Mistake Example #2

Misuse of singular/plural nouns ('There are much people here' instead of 'There are many people here')

As part of my career portfolio, I want to highlight my experience in project management. There isare many projects I have successfully led, and each of them requires different skills. My ability to adapt to various challenges haves been recognized by my previous employers, and there areis much positive feedbacks from my team members.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was very good! Just a few small changes were needed to make nouns and verbs consistent. "

As part of my career portfolio, I want to highlight my experience in project management. There are many projects I have successfully led, and each of them requires different skills. My ability to adapt to various challenges has been recognized by my previous employers, and there is much positive feedback from my team members.

As part of my career portfolio, I want to highlight my experience in project management. There is many projects I have successfully led, and each of them require different skills. My ability to adapt to various challenges have been recognized by my previous employers, and there are much positive feedbacks from my team members.

Mistake Example #3

Using overly formal or direct language

As a highly competent software engineer, I am writing to express my strong interest in your esteemedcompany. I possess excellent skills inprogrammingskills and have achieved numerous accomplishments in my previous roles. I am confident that my abilities will make agreatly contributeion to the success of your organization, and I am eager to discuss how I can be of service to your team.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I just replaced a word or two to make the English sound more natural. Overall, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

As a highly competent software engineer, I am writing to express my strong interest in your company. I possess excellent programming skills and have achieved numerous accomplishments in my previous roles. I am confident that my abilities will make a great contribution to the success of your organization, and I am eager to discuss how I can be of service to your team.

As a highly competent software engineer, I am writing to express my strong interest in your esteemed company. I possess excellent skills in programming and have achieved numerous accomplishments in my previous roles. I am confident that my abilities will greatly contribute to the success of your organization, and I am eager to discuss how I can be of service to your team.