Common English Mistakes in Newsletters by Italian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing a Newsletter in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of passive voice

Dear Subscribers, it is announced that oOur new product line will be launched next week. The excitement is felt by eEveryone ion the teamis excited, and a special discount is being offered to our loyal customers. YWe appreciate your feedback is appreciated,andit is hoped that you will enjoy the new features. Stay tuned for more updates, which will be shared soon.!

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the passive voice to the active voice to make the English sound a bit more natural. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Dear Subscribers, Our new product line will be launched next week. Everyone on the team is excited, and a special discount is being offered to our loyal customers. We appreciate your feedback and hope that you will enjoy the new features. Stay tuned for more updates, which will be shared soon!

Dear Subscribers, it is announced that our new product line will be launched next week. The excitement is felt by everyone in the team, and a special discount is being offered to our loyal customers. Your feedback is appreciated, and it is hoped that you will enjoy the new features. Stay tuned for more updates, which will be shared soon.

Mistake Example #2

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

Ciao amici,! wWe are very excited to announce our new collection of summer clothes that will make you feel like you are on holiday every day! Don't lomises this opportunity to refresh your wardrobe with the latest trends. WCome waitfor you in our store to discover all the new arrivals and enjoy special discounts. We'll see yous soon!

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"It needed a few tweaks to make the English sound more natural, but good job overall!"

Ciao amici! We are very excited to announce our new collection of summer clothes that will make you feel like you are on holiday every day! Don't miss this opportunity to refresh your wardrobe with the latest trends. Come to our store to discover all the new arrivals and enjoy special discounts. We'll see you soon!

Ciao amici, we are very excited to announce our new collection of summer clothes that will make you feel like you are on holiday every day! Don't lose this opportunity to refresh your wardrobe with the latest trends. We wait for you in our store to discover all the new arrivals and enjoy special discounts. We see us soon!

Mistake Example #3

Confusing singular and plural nouns

Ciao amici, we are excited to announce our new product line that will transform your kitchen experience! Our innovative gadgets are designed to make cooking more enjoyable and efficient. Don't miss out on this opportunity to upgrade your culinary skills with our exclusive offer available only this month.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I made some changes to singular and plural nouns. Overall, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Ciao amici, we are excited to announce our new product line that will transform your kitchen experience! Our innovative gadgets are designed to make cooking more enjoyable and efficient. Don't miss out on this opportunity to upgrade your culinary skills with our exclusive offer available only this month.

Ciao amici, we are excited to announce our new product line that will transform your kitchen experience! Our innovative gadget are designed to make cooking more enjoyable and efficient. Don't miss out on this opportunity to upgrade your culinary skill with our exclusive offer available only this month.